Well.. I'm really disappointed with the ending. You got me feeling like I'm riding a roller coaster but in the end, you successfully got me trapped with disappointed feelings.
Same with your other story "The Beast" .. U want us to continue your story with our viewpoint.
Well, I know some authors put some story end for readers could continue on their own. But not me, you got me trapped with this nightmare, i couldn't forget this story and maybe couldn't reread it for the second time. you've got me suffered .. TT,TT
How could you...
i found this story by accident and i have to say i like it. it was new and i was surprised at how Sess was ooc. Kags was a very confused woman in this story and im not used to her being that way. you gave feeling to Sess and i liked that. sometimes we chase the ones that run away and notice (to late) the one that was there all along. keep up the great writing and next time you need a beta look me up and ill do my bset to help. c'ya'
Please uodate
Great story very well written!
I hope you make a sequel. The ending was practical and real.
Nicole (Chapter 10) - Thu 03 Apr 2014
I enjoyed that, and I thought that the ending was perfect. Declarations of love coming from Kagome at that point would have been weird.
Andrea (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Nov 2012
A very practical ending :)
The conversation with Sango was rather childish on Kagome's side. Just because Sango challenged her, she did not twist Kagome's arm to make her. Her conversation with Inuyasha went much better than I though it would except for her childish comment about him marrying Kikyou instead of her. He was adult about it and seemed understanding. I thought he offered good advice. I'm glad she and Sesshoumaru are talking things out. That's a good first step. I believe it will take a while before she completely gets over her feelings for Inuyasha while they slowly transfer to Sesshoumaru. Hopefully, she'll do some more growing up along the way. It may take him longer, though, before he completely trusts her even after she eventually confesses her love for him.
I look forward to the sequel.
I don't know why, but this whole story just rubbed me the wrong way. I wasn't lacking anything, and it was original, I just, I don't know. It just felt wrong or something. I think it may be something personal on my part, that I can't stand people taking advantage of others feelings. Like how Inuyasha treated Kagome and in turn, Kagome treated Sesshomaru. I think Sesshomaru was too kind for someone like Kagome, because she deserved to be abandoned. I feel like he shouldn't have saved her, she needed to hit rock bottom and learn to grow up. She's just so horrible...-shudder- there was nothing likeable about her in this story. She was a user and blind and selfish and only thought about herself and didn't think about anything really. She lacked dept and I just hated her!! This is the first story I have ever read when I just hated Kagome so much. Gah, you are talented writer to inspire such emotions, though. Great job.
Soo...this is the middle of the story......
I needz moar. C-qwell plz. :D
This story was amazing and I enjoyed it!
Alrite =] finally able to leave a review ^.^
Really loving your story. Just suxs how indecisive Kagome is being. Hold on Sesshomaru!
Keep it coming.
So, her brain still wants to believe she still has a chance with Inuyasha. I'm beginning to think she's mentally sick with her obsession to the point she needs to see a shrink. She is doing so much damage to what could be a beautiful thing between her and Sesshoumaru. I don't blame him for his feelings and thoughts toward her now. I know you said there was only one more chapter, but I wish the story could be extended. Normally a situation like this would take time to work itself out because of her obsessing over Inuyasha for so many years is not going to cure itself overnight. She really does need mental therapy before she can completely feel free to truly love someone else.
*sigh....* almost a step forwards.....almost...
Andrea (Chapter 9) - Mon 29 Oct 2012
What a twist! I was prepared for everything to go in another direction and BAM it all stops! Oh Sessho... I'd say his name XD You keep me on my toes ;) thanks for the update! Good luck with school!
Maryssa (Chapter 8) - Wed 19 Sep 2012
aw how sweet i hope things work out fine for sessy and kags cant wait for the next chapter
Alexis (Chapter 8) - Wed 19 Sep 2012
Great story please update soon!!!!!!!!
This chapter was an eye opening one for Kagome. Sesshoumaru is being very patient with giving her time. I like the way the chapter ended. You don't always have to have sex to have that close, warm feeling of belonging and need.
Andrea (Chapter 8) - Tue 18 Sep 2012
This chapter was simply delicious. Poor sesshomaru and his frustration!! Can't wait for the next chapter :3
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