Aw, so sad. Thus is life, I guess. But wow...such a beautiful night turns into such an awkward, uncomfortable morning.
Phyllis (Chapter 19) - Sat 08 Jun 2013
Wow, what a scene! Very well done, passionate, erotic, and exciting! I can't wait to see what happens after.
Phyllis (Chapter 18) - Sat 08 Jun 2013
What a twist on A-un's story. Very original. And I was wondering when Miroku would make an appearance! Nice job!
Phyllis (Chapter 17) - Sat 08 Jun 2013
I'd feel floaty too! Next chapter!
Phyllis (Chapter 16) - Sat 08 Jun 2013
And I spelled A-un's name wrong. My bad. Anyways, loved this chapter. Naraku is as cruel as always. And is that Kagura, or did you really mean, Kaguya? Just wondering. On to the next chapter!
Phyllis (Chapter 15) - Sat 08 Jun 2013
Enter Ah-Uhn! Great chapter as always.
Phyllis (Chapter 14) - Sat 08 Jun 2013
Looks like Kagome's father will have some 'splaining to do once Touga gets over there to visit him. And things are heating up between our favorite couple! Can't wait!
Phyllis (Chapter 13) - Sat 08 Jun 2013
What a cute chapter! And we see the origin of the subjucation beads. Very interesting take on it!
Phyllis (Chapter 12) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Wow, what a backstory! Very well done!
Phyllis (Chapter 11) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Loved it! It's nice to get to know Kagome a little.
Phyllis (Chapter 10) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Whoa what a twist. I'm happy to see how this plays out!
Phyllis (Chapter 9) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Oh, that sounds problematic. Hope he gets there in time. I must say, you are an exceptional writer!
Phyllis (Chapter 8) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Another great one. I was hoping he would accompany her.
Phyllis (Chapter 7) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Nope. I think Sesshomaru will find that Kagome has more courage than most.
Phyllis (Chapter 6) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Someone's smitten! Very nice!
Phyllis (Chapter 5) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Another great chapter. What a sore loser! On to the next!
Phyllis (Chapter 4) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Very good. Love the set up for things between Sesshomaru and Kagome. What a first meeting. On to the next!
Phyllis (Chapter 3) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Very nice! On to the next!
Phyllis (Chapter 2) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
Yay! Shippo!!! Great chapter!
Phyllis (Chapter 1) - Wed 05 Jun 2013
This is sounding like a very interesting story! I love the backgrounds given for the characters, and the fact that it's not all peachy, like some fairytale. It's more realistic. Very nice!
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