I love this one! It felt like a old western movie!
What amazed me the most was the description and detail you write with! It makes me vision the scene as I read! Awesome! And Sesshomarus intro was just hooootttt! Shooting Naraku down! And then the description of Naraku falling face down into his half eaten lasanga!!! Lolol Narakus hold on his sheriff badge falling from his trembling hands!!!! Perfecttt!!! Just perfect!
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Oh my goodness! I totally didn't know what to expect...and then....and then....I ended up in fits of laughter causing my parents to ask me what is so funny. Oh my goodness this is so good! I love the creativity you took in introducing us to Kagome in a wheelchair. It made me wonder what happened...and the reason why she was placed there made it even more hilarious!
I love how you had Inuyasha there to listen in on it! Kagomes rant was just the perfect touch. And oh boy, sesshomaru still seemed...like sesshomaru! Amazing job!
