Very good story

The emotions and thoughts of the characters you have presented thus far are well done. I love your writing style in this. The emotional descriptions provide a deeper connection to the characters and story overall. I am suprised this doesn't have way more reviews. I don't review often unless something moves me to do so (which this did) and I wanted to take a moment to say well done!

How'd it just end like that??!! What happened with Kikyo???

Squealing again!!!! They're so devious!!! I love it!!

Why was the guard the best part! Lol

She was so much stronger than Inu and Kikyo, I always wondered why authors use them to break her so. You would think Sess would be attracted to the strength she shows in breaking them...just my thoughts 

Soooooo yeah I totally squealed like a girl!!!

D'awww! Awesome story :)

D:

How rude...

Nods. Uhum.

... (growls)

T_T

So sweet!

good. kagome ended up happy sesshomaur got the girl , and dear god i hope he loves her as she deserves to be loved.
Inuyasha got banshd from the western lands and everyone knows his mates a whore and totally human. tho her being mated tossed me for a loop i was reading ans one moment he was sure she wasn't pure just clean and the enxt moment she's his mate. WOW 

I'm gonna steal one of Sesshomaru, Kikyou, and Naraku's lines here. "Die Inuyasha!"

I like this story a lot and hope you won't mind if I say you should expand on it and create a sequel or prequel

I really enjoyed the story! Your writing style is very good, dark but good. You have true talent.

~Stormie

I'm calling holes on this one, is there is sequel, whatever happened to Inu and Kikyo, did she realize the spell didn't work? Did Inuyasha move on with his life? that was huge part of your plot you just kind of left wide open. It was a little confusing with the transitions at time, but everything else was really good and I enjoyed it over all, but curiosity will not sated until I find out more!!!! Good job for a start though.

Love the story it was great.

Congratulations on finishing your first story!  And what a wonderful story it is... excellent, in fact!  Thank you so much for sharing your brainchild with all us greedy readers!!

:D

~~Wiccan~~