It's a really good story so far... I wonder if Inuyasha will ever find out that Kikyo was sent by his brother and if so what will he do exactly.
She's living up to the saying "Smile, it makes people wonder what you're up to." Can't wait to see where you take this!
AngelGir86 (Chapter 7) - Tue 07 Feb 2012
And now we're adding Koga into the mix? Hmmm, this should be very interesting when it comes time for Sesshomaru and Koga to meet...very interesting.
tetralis (Chapter 7) - Mon 06 Feb 2012
Yeah!! I'll be rooting for Kagome! Let the games begin. ?(^?^)?
Sessygurl (Chapter 6) - Mon 06 Feb 2012
Poor Kagome, I wonder if she will be doing her research on him as soon as she gets home? She seems like the type. Plus, why didnt Sesshoumaru question her teaming up with him? I mean she could be a spy. LOL This story is awesome! Keep up the great work!!
tetralis (Chapter 6) - Mon 06 Feb 2012
Great story! And you updated twice! I just hope you at least make Kagome more resistant to Sesshoumaru's charm than what she's already sounding like. I know this is not canon but Kagome's character has always been one where she's not taken in by a pretty face; after all, she's been all over Nippon, surrounded by beautiful youkai and never takes notice.
But, what I don't understand, why do you keep adding commas where none are needed? like "Kagome had finally found the building, she was looking for." and many others throughout all your chapters? It just makes it sound funny to pause in the sentence like that.
An enjoyable chapter; just one thing that caught my eye, it should say "woman" with an 'a', not women, with an 'e' because there is only one woman Kagura was speaking to, and that was Kagome. Sesshoumaru kinda threw me off in the chapter because of his reactions to Kagome. It felt more open than he usually is, but an OOC Sesshoumaru is not an end all be all, we see lots of different takes in different stories. Onward, I go.
-Kaminoko
AngleGirl86 (Chapter 5) - Mon 06 Feb 2012
This is getting good. Wonder how Inuyasha will react seeing his former employee working with his brother. Will Inuyasha ever find out about Kikyo?
I MUST KNOW MORE!!!!
Hope to read more soon!
Loving where this story is going. I cant wait to see how Kikyo can keep up with Kagome...lol Its definately gonna be a good fight. Sesshoumaru is going to have his hands full in trying to get Kagome in bed with him, since that is exactly what Kikyo did with Inuyasha.
Azumii (Chapter 4) - Sun 05 Feb 2012
Interesting... I am looking forward to reading more. :D Please update soon! xoxo
AngelGirl86 (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Feb 2012
Get him Kagome, get him!
SEB (Chapter 3) - Sun 05 Feb 2012
Gotta love 'Kick Butt' Kagome! InuYasha is going down. Thanks.
It's a very interesting start but aggravatingly short. It's like you are reading and happily enjoying when all of sudden it stops. I nearly threw my phone (house) at the wall. Either way, it is definitely enjoyable so far, and I hope to see the rest soon. In terms of characters, they seem realistic and interesting to watch... well read. I like how you have everything set up, so I'll be following you all the way.
--Kaminoko
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