*flushes*
Oh wow. Very nice imagery there gurlie. And I adore that he's somehow, magically, barely keeping that slender thread of control. Awesome update! And Merry Christmas!
This. Update it. I'm serious. I will go all domme on you if you don't.
Seriously though, you've done a really good job showing her own conflict over what she wants and who she is, as well as her reaction to being stuck in time. I'm really curious where you're going with it. Also, kudos for the title. *ahem* If curious, you should check out Midori or twoknottyboys for inspiration if you haven't already.
