this was a really great story. you did a great job!!!!!
yay loved it! but where's the epilogue O.o!!!! ^_^ hope an epilogue comes up eventually but the story was still great!
LOVE IT!!!!!!
Karli (Chapter 6) - Tue 03 Jan 2012
that was amazing glad you posted it
this was really good!
unknown (Chapter 6) - Tue 28 Jul 2009
| hey .. i loved ur story .. its soo logical , yes logical thats the right word for it :P
keep it up , i approve :D
nerine (Chapter 6) - Sat 25 Jul 2009
| I absolutley love this story!
jasmine (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Jun 2008
| love the story...update soon.
Deana (Chapter 6) - Sun 04 May 2008
| Love the story. Just a little bit of advice: be careful of those words that sound alike. Such as here hear and there and their. Each has a different meaning and lends differently to the story But other than that great story Keep up the good work
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