Great story
I love it I hope there's a sequel coming cause it's awesome!
More!!!! You have to give me more soon!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D I can't wait to see the relationship between Inuyasha and Hishen get better, and start mending Inuyasha's heart.
Keep it coming.
Sesshomaru lead Souta lead him to where Kagome was. Ther is a typo just wanted to let you know oh and there is another one in one of the sceens of Inu No Taishou's book the I is lower cased all the rest was excellent thank you for writing
Nice!
This was a sad chapter, please update soon.
This was one of the saddest episodes I watched, and now one of the saddest chapters I've read. Again Kagura dies at the hands of Naraku - ba$tard...and I have tears in my eyes...she SO did not deserve that. Apparently I liked her.
I like the story too!
Great start, please update soon.
I love this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
I like your story a lot (read 12 chapters in one sitting), but there are a few things you need to work on to make it better.
(1.) Don't use IM-speak, like "c ya". It just looks...immature.
(2.) Learn the difference between "your" and "you're". One is possessive, the other is a contraction of you+are.
(3.) Check your writing before posting. You have multiple instances of words missing from sentences or improper capitalization.
Great story! keep up the good work!
;_; I hope he gets there in time.
I;m glad Sesshomaru finally admits he loves Kagome, please update soon.
Good story! At the beginning I was concerned I would have to read about the anime scene. But Im very glad you went on with your own story. I also was wondering, why? Kagome was forgetting so quickly about Inuyasha's condition when she treated Rin. But since she was a little human girl, it made sense to treat her first. Glad to see so far no one had to lay around for too long hurt or sick. But Sesshomaru badly wounded, OH! MY! I usually don't like Naraku, but do like the laugh. Thanks!
Great chapter, Happy New Year!
:oI'm on the edge of my seat. i want to know what happens. Poor Kaogme. ;_;
Love the kiss between Kagome and Sesshomaru, please update soon. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
where the next chapter
This chapter was sad, please update soon.
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