(as of ch 3) you have an interesting idea here, but i feel you're moving a bit fast. that's just me, though. question: how did kagome know how to go to the underworld? had she been trained for it unkowningly? anyway, i'll continue reading because this is certainly interesting!

wow, that made me cry...

What a wonderful story! The display of grief from Sesshomaru was heart wrenching. Well Done!! Please update again soon. I want to read so much more. LadySafire

Interesting start you have so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon:)