I REALLY WOULD LIKE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT WILL YOU BE UPDATING YOU STORY 

I LOVE it. But you really need to tell us about the reunion between Kagome and the others

A little proof reading goes a long way, but otherwise it was good.  You are a good writer and I look forward to exploring your work.  My first lemon was a little bare-bones too so don't worry about it.  We all have to start somewhere. :-)

i loved it! It's the best fan-fiction i have read so far, and i want to read more! Please continue the great work.

I thank everyone for the review and I am glad you like it. I apologize for the grammatical errors but I have gone back and fixed the one's I have noticed. Unfortuneatly, I have no beta reader but I would appreciate it if you could inform me of anymore errors you find.

~kiki~

HAHAHA!!  Kami I  wish there was more to this!!

This sounds interesting but I can't get past the poor pacing and the grammatical errors.

It seemed a little rushed, maybe should split it into a two shot, or just made it longer. I enjoyed it overall though, despite the small little errors like grammar and spelling.