Hii!

I hope you're doing well!! I really enjoyed this and I hope you'll come back and finish it. The time jumps are a little confusing but it's interesting to see how it affected the future. I like how multidimensional the characters are and and I can't wait to see where you go with this!

I think I'm gonna give up on this story at this point

Please edit your story you are not connecting your part A story and it is very disconcerting. 

I am one of those people who read your story from the past and I think I very much preferred it the way it was originally

The way you edited the story has made it even more confusing because you are not connecting the one in the past properly.
it's jumping all over the place and it doesn't seem to be part of the storyline 

Why did you make only her father Japanese it was always her mother that was Japanese

I both hate and like some of the changes

Nice chapter. 

Hey!!! Love this story; second time reading it. I especially love your specificity in adjectives and scenes. 

soooooo I'm going to stick my foot in mouth here: second I've missed the lemon.

is It just implied or am I blind? ???????????????? 

I'm hooked!

Wow, those two chapters were intense....  I'm glad Kaede made it out but I also hope Kagome doesn't get hurt either...  This chapter is double wow....  I wonder what the book meant that she will kill them all....  I know Kagome wouldn't do anything to harm yokai but what did that eerie message mean and jii-san believe it when Kagome came to the shrine.  Oh the fun of reading update soon.

WOW.....  I forgot about this story....  I really do like it being my third time reading all the chapters you have posted.  I hoping you will add more... I enjoy reading, my writing is nothing compared to yours and I am a big fan.  Update a new chapter for this story please... Yeah I know I still have like 10 to 15 chapters left before I post another review...  LOL..  :p

After finding this story, I must say I am impressed. Dual story lines, separate time periods, keeping it all flowing between both... Not an easy feat, but you have done so wonderfully. I have enjoyed your take on our favorite characters, as well as your additions. I eagerly await your next update, as I do look forward to seeing where you're going with this story. 

Both chapters are great, please update the next chapter quickly!

Hello,

I'm pretty sure that the book has the prophecy of the Shikon Miko in it! Though I was a bit confused with the reaction of the assistant. The demons so far didn't react this way to the Shikon Miko, she was seen as a hero or savior and less as a killer...

I'm curious to see what exactly her grandpa knows about this matter and if it was a coincidence that Kagome's father wanted them to return to Japan now!

It seems like the two storylines are coming slowly together!

I look forward to your next update!

Hello,

I just read your story in two days, and I have to say that I'm impressed!!! I couldn't stop reading :) You are basically telling two storys at the same time, which will be connected in a future chapter. Because you change regularly between modern and past, and have them named as story A and story B I had no problems with following your fic.

When I was reading storyline A I was like "I want to know what happens next, this storyline is the more interesting", and them came a chapter of storyline B and I was just thinking the same :D I just can't decide which one is better...they are both amazing!!!

I LOVE you OC Ryo/Ivan!!! He is an amazing boy/man!

I'm sorry to see that things between Kagome and her father are so tense now, but he really needed to feel (not only see) for himself how good Kagome is in kicking asses! 

Throughout all the chapters there is only one thing I didn't quite understand, and it is this thing with Tenseiga cutting through Kagome's body and reiki and ceating an alternate world...I hope you will explain this theory in another chapter again.

I'm looking forward to your next update!

Nice chapter, please update the next chapter quickly! Happy Belated Resurrection Day! Happy Belated Easter!

OMG....  I love this story...  It took me three days of reading and I like the before and after of Kagome's life and how some of the charaters have a change of OC....  The back and forth kinda threw me off but as I continued to read I have to say that it is a challange to do that and keep in mind where you are at in the story.  I do hope in the future Kagome and Sesshomaru hit it off wouldn't be the same if they kept thinking and not go for it.  Until next time....  Update soon.

Another great chapter, please update the next chapter quickly!

I'm glad your back, its been four years since you updated this story, I hope this year you finish this year. This chapter was great.

I know you said there was rape and all, but, I wasn't expecting in the first chapter. Not that I haven't read t in a first chapter before. It's just that it was startling with the after effect and tell near public one. But I got to say you're writing is wonderful.

Very good story keep up the work update ppl l????????????????