you have me intrested please write more and update(:

Wow I really like where this is headed! I actually love Koga so I am really glad you made him into a good guy :) so many people make him into an evil airhead that stalks her! And this story is really captivating... It doesn't seem like you struggled at all with the second chapter, though I know that quote was a difficult one (i totally cheated, skipped it and just did the prompt lol) but you made it really beautiful and really powerful. Really a stunning job!

Love,

Caleesci

The suspense...its killing me....pleaseupdateanotherchapterbeforeIgomad....please?

-sobs- why'd you have to make it so sad-sobs some more-

But good job....still do sad...

-sobs- why'd you have to make it so sad-sobs some more-

But good job....still do sad...

The one time Kouga doesn't get rejected and this ends up happening to him. You got me hooked with the summary!

The first chapter was interesting. It was captivating, but I think even more captivating will be seeing how you go from this point in the first chapter towards where it seems like you wanna go/what you have explaned this story as (having). I am looking forward to seeing why these things have happened and what else is in store this journy or better yet quite bumpy ride. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

>_> Does this smell like chloroform to you? LOL

Wow, I loved this chapter and it has been added to my favorites! I saw this from the Promt/Quote Challenge! I am really interested in seeing where this story goes!

~Smo

O_o i waw sOOoOoOOOO about to be like... this is not SK! and wow, didn't see that coming! wonder whats gunna happen next!

Great chapter!!! :) I loved it and even if the next chapter doesn't contain my quotes/prompts I am SOOOOO reading it!!! :)

As unfair as it seems, life is most certainly unfair, especially to those who don't deserve it.

Great first chapter! A little bit of angst and tragedy, but enough mystery to leave me more curious than sad. I eagerly await your next installment!