The slow pace of Sesshomaru getting closer and more intimate is tantilizing. But the very condensed wording often leaves me confused and Im not understanding what is happening some of the time. I wish you would be willing to be more clear as to what is happening. The story is good and is expressed from a different angle, which I do like. So please continue, Thanks!
KT (Chapter 19) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
An apple a day keeps the doctor away... and probably Sesshoumaru closer =)
Great chapter! Yay a new favourite story to follow! I hope you keep updating, I really like this story!
KAggie (Chapter 19) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
I'm glad to see this story back in action again! I...honestly forgot everything that happened, so I had to read it all over again. lol But not a waste at all! It's still nice too see the pace their relationship is travelling. Is InuYasha going to appear in the near future? Or any other characters? It's been a while since Sesshoumaru nabbed her. Well, I can't wait to read more chapters. :D
Dani (Chapter 18) - Wed 26 Oct 2011
Sorry many typos but I think you get the picture; Sesshoumaru does not love her at all, only desires her body and sees a use in her and does not want to return her to Inuyasha. Which please don't add love yet because they need a lot more character development, although I like your pace so don't change a thing! I want to see what happens when in fulfilling his duties he continues to be a pervert and she honestly continues to resist-not enjoying his forced attentions. It makes the story much more interesting with Kagome not enjoying even a second of it. Also credible.
Dani (Chapter 18) - Wed 26 Oct 2011
Why would he still teh shards now? And has he been havign sex with her while she has been asleep? It seems to more more like he desires to touch this unique and odd human than truly thinking he was fulfillign her needs. He doesn't seem to try to bring her he rfavorite foods or to choose to let her rest early and carry her! Pervert! I am glad Kagome did not give in to him or feel arousal-because no matter how attractive he is hsi actions would cause fear ina young girl, and i think it would also magnify her fear to see their differences (i.e. strong MALE demon) at that moment o forced intimacy. And Sesshoumaru's breastial self, fluff-sama, is also desirous of her company even if she doesn't want the dirty dog smelling piece of moko moko.
Love it, very well written XD
~lily
Hahahahahahahaha... ooooh, he's gonna get it now, not dount 'bout it.
~lily
Lillian (Chapter 16) - Fri 02 Sep 2011
OH MY GOSH! No he didn't....no he didn't. What a DOG!
Oh wait.
Kagome-chan.... never thought and endearment would pass through his lips. Why didn't he give the shard to her?
~lily
Lily (Chapter 14) - Fri 12 Aug 2011
I like, I like :D Your way is subtle and refined, enticing ;P
~lily
Lillian (Chapter 14) - Fri 12 Aug 2011
Oh Ejunk....he is sooooo mean! Tantalizing her with his luuuuuuvely body, and showing humor. Poor Kagome: she's never going to stand a chance when he finally pulls his HEAD OUT OF THE GROUND. *cough* Ahem.
This series continues to confuse me, but I think that's the point. ;) Perhaps all will be revealed later, anyhow I like it. The mysteriousness of the story draws meh in, and the wierdness of Sessh. Can't wait to see where this is going. :D
~lily
She died!? Oh, that was admirable and stupid all at once, but I would have done the same. Let her teach Fluffy a lesson.
~lily
Wait, he went to CHINA to get something for her? now that's.... I dunno what it is, but .... wow 0_o .... he takes his job seriously :D
~lily
Lillian (Chapter 11) - Sat 06 Aug 2011
How is she 'his' now? He can command her to do anything? I understand that he resurrected her with Tensaiga but does that mean he has full control over her actions and memories? His statement, 'forget Inuyasha' was very interesting.
Lillian (Chapter 8) - Mon 25 Jul 2011
Hi there! I'm a big fan of this story. I alays check to see if it's been updated; I suppose I really just should add it to my favorites list. The collection is quite intriguing and I look forwards to seeing the next post.
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Okay first awesome story! I love it its really cute in my opinon and I hope you continue to write many more stories like it. c:
Second I wanted to ask you how you post up stories on dokuga.
I've been trying to find a way to do it but saddly I can't, so I was hoping you could give me the answer.
I'll be waiting for your answer. Thank you~
-SesshomaruXKagome
Really loving this series! You're bringing something new to the story of Kag and Sess that I can't quite put my finger on, but if I had a word, it would probably be 'primal'. Don't know why, but there ya go.
In any case, loved it!!!
Nice collection of one-shots so far. I wonder how exactly she is to work against Inuyasha? Knowing Kagome she will try to escape again. It is only a matter of time.
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