I am curious to know what happened to Rin. She was not with Shesshamuru and Jake when they left the castle 

I would like to start by saying I have enjoyed this story so far. Your narrative is well written and edited, and I appreciate your storytelling style. It has made me uncomfortable and even angry at times, challenging me to change my preconceived notions.

I believe that many fans of Inuyasha get swept up i the fairytale romance of a handsome humanoid male forget that Sesshoumaru is inuyoukai. The humanoid form isn't his true form. I don't condone incest between humans because it's generally bad when cousins marry. However, I applaud you for addressing dog behavior and pack mentality. The storyline also pushes the question of how far a mother is really willing to go for her child. Those who are repulsed by the content shouldn't read.

That went very differently than I was expecting: from beginning to end. You really managed to get my emotions involved too, particularly in the first half of the story. 

...and I never would have guessed Jaken for destroying the well; always figured it was Sesshomaru. 

poor jaken hahahahaha

This was such a great read! Those particular parts in the last 2 chapters were a little off-putting but you did it in a way that wasn't so freaky as one would imagine. Overall, I give a giant thumbs up! My only complaint is that you didn't really make it clear if Kagome ever got to see her family again. At first it sounded as if she wouldn't but then you mentioned that drinking Sesshomaru's blood kept her young so..... yeah. But like I said that is my only complaint. Fantastic job and I hope to read more fics as well thought out as this one!

But officially going to syop reading. "mother and son getting sexual (Thoughts)"?? Really? And sesshomaru busted the well no woman would be fine with these thing. On top of getting pregnant without consent. Not reading anymore

Well uhhmmm ok. Kagome is taking this way to calmly. Shouldn't she be upset? Why isn't she atleast reprimanding him? He got her pregnant for pits sake. And she didn't know. There is no way any woman would be fine with this even is it is Sesshomaru sama. I think perhaps you could put a scene with her Being upset u know make it more believable. Good work on the tale thought. Grammar is great spelling great, plot excellent.

WOW...Why??????????

OMG I am soo!!!!!! glad you posted this stoy on here. I have been tring to find this story for forever. I really love it.

Great story

i loved everything but when it got down to incest i just couldn't finish reading the second one.

but great story!

I loved this story. Thanks for an awesome story. The last couple of chapters were a little gross but I just skipped the incest part. Other then that I loved it. I laughed a couple of times and my neices thought I was insane. Thanks.

Aww poor Kagome. I mean I know Sess doesn't want her to leave but its still sad that she can't see her family anymore. I like this chapter and the story so far :)

Awesome job!!!! I cant wait for your next fic

That one dreaked me out (the esex thing)! gah!  :P

Cant wait to read more!!!

Still good. Nothing much to say but keep up the awesome writing. Um, I would suggest, though, to put a warning in the summary. Might stem the flow of complaints. Personally, I don't mind, since it's fanfiction, but that'd probably be best. Wouldn't want you to be flooded with hate-reviews anymore than already.

So, let me get this straight...she has nothing to say about the fact he invaded her dreams and impregnated her. Everything about this situation is just A-okay and taken in stride. 

i love it

YAY FINALLY! Couldn't wait to read it ^-^ Bwahaha I KNEW Kishi would do that! :3 Can't wait to see the next chapter! :D And don't even bother with stupid comments about incest, ppl who write that obviously didn't even read the whole chapter -,- They just saw word "incest" and went crazy ;P UPDATE SOON PLS :>

EWWWWWWWWW...... how could u add something lik dat. You had a prefect story but u had to add such digusting thoughts( mother n son being sexual) Ive found this to be a BIG shock.....ewww