I started reading the first chapter, and it seemed well thought out but it is hard to read through the grammatical errors. I'm going to try and ignore them and read on with the story because it seems interesting. I'll leave another review when I'm done.

This a very nice story, but sometimes it is difficult to read through the grammatical mistakes, like: "... Jaken suddenly appeared out of the brush.  Sesshoumaru looked unhappy.  That was understanding it.  "  These look like fragments ....did you want to say instead of 'understanding it'... 'that was an understatement'  

You just have to keep an eye open for word tenses and meanings, like "his whip went threw his leg" I'm sure you meant 'through' Your word 'threw' is the past tense of throw, like: 'to throw the ball.'

I hope this helps you construct your story. It's only given to help not to bash. I do like your story and am reading all of it and waiting patiently for the next one. If you want more help PM me.

Cheers!

Update Quickly!!!

I really enjoy this story & I greatly look forward to what will happen next. I'm very excited with the progression of the relationship between Sessh & Kagome & look forward to them mating. I hate Kikyo.

I look forward to the next chapter update.

great story so far will read more ;)

oh more more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!I don't understand why almost 2,000 are reading your story & checked last time was almost 300+ less wich means for this chapter alone 300+ more have read it meaning 300-500 are reading & keeping up with your story so I'm not the only one who enjoys it. I will tell you the truth as I have come to review & converse with other authors on  a more personal level & I don't care if they email me something mean because I will not lie, when I read a story if I like it I review honestly & not negatively, I ask questions when I'm confused & I always explain to the author that I only review & question becuase I enjoy a story

I will not lie & I know not why the people who run this site have not done right ,I like the stories here but I found that there are a group of others who I know not if they are readers or authors but they email,IM or msg people who review telling them either not to review unless they have read over 5-10 chaps. I tell you this so you don't get upset that you are not getting reviews & remember to check how many people read each chap as they may have gotten the msgs that I & others have gotten & think they are doing the right thing. I also hope that the people in charge of this site see this & check the truth of my words.I have nothing to gain by lying. 

Please know that this is a great story & remember many are reading it,it is true that many fear they will fall in love with a story & then have the author drop it.If you are a reader of books or what not you can imagine how upsetting if books were sold in chapters & many stopped writing after the 5,25, or 45 th chap.

like I said I love you work & look forward to your next chapter.

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Oh I just found this story & I like it. I hope she stays with Sessh.I almost wish this was one of those stories where Kagome was more than human or where powerful Miko's like her could birth full youkai pups with miko powers also or an immunity to Miko power. Look at me I want Sessh & Kagome to be together so bad that I'm trying to come up with any reason that Sessh would think well of her & not think that by loving her & making her his Mate it would kill him like his dad with Inu's mom who was a human with no power. Like maybe his dad tried to tell him not to hate all humans because his mistake with Inu's mom,you can't help who you love but powerful miko's are special they can birth powerful full blood pups...okay so I'm desperate...maybe he'll find a scroll or she'll change into a special powerful immortal being???

I love this story & I'm sorry I'm so desperate to find a way for him to see her as more.

I can't wait for your next chapter.