Omg!! i love this story!! and i absolutely love Ai!! hhe is gorgeous like sess, ...
your story stir my emotions, it makes me feel like wtf!! kagome try to move on ok! it's not like he is the last man on earth and for once stop crying, for god's sake! argghh..
and for the part that shows that sess was still affected was so awesome, and will also love it if sess come to regret and suffer for all the bad things that he did to kagome, haha
p.s.
although this is a sesskag pairing i hope that Ai will still have a happy ending, he had so many hardships in life and i think he deserve to be happy :) :)
Emily (Chapter 8) - Thu 21 Mar 2013
!!! It's great!! Nice to see Ai's side of the story!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!! Ecited!
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 Feb 2013
update, im dying here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Valasaurus (Chapter 8) - Fri 18 Jan 2013
Sooooooo glad I read this! And I absolutely love Ai, although I hate how hung up kagome is over sess. I mean sess is a god but if he was as much of an ass like that then maybe kagome should flaunt that she's over him and not affected by him. Also I hope your continuing >____<
I like where the story is heading. Sesshoumaru is being a jerk and Kagome needs someone who can appreciate her more. I think Ai deserves her more than Sesshoumaru at the moment. Besides, I think that Sesshoumaru should have some angsty regrets for not treating Kagome right. I can't wait for the next update!!!
I love Ai! I was a bit worried he'd do something to hurt Kagome just to try to get back at Sesshomaru but I'm beginning to think Ai truly cares for Kagome now. But I can't wait for Sesshomaru to be faced with the fact that he believed someone else's lies on Kagome. Thye must have had some real solid proof in order to turn him so against her.
Please update soon! (like tomorrow!)
::squeals in delight:
finally a new chappie!!!
::cuddles both chappie and the rinku::
loved it deary!!
now your gonna have another out soon right? right?
Ai is so adorable, at this point poo on Sess he dont deserve Kags.
keep it up!!!
It's been two months and four weeks since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Haven (Chapter 8) - Fri 11 Jan 2013
Arrrrrrgggghhhhhhh. I think you were trying to show a darker side of Ai, but I just feel more sorry for the poor guy on how he was treated his whole life. And Sess is still a douche. Man I hate him in this fic....he is no good. Kagome run!!!
I'm on the edge of my seat. Must have more.
Vicky (Chapter 8) - Fri 11 Jan 2013
I love it....I still like Ai, though he seems a bit shady at times. I'm glad you updated. I hope you'll update again soon. :)
Oh I loved it!! I love Ai's character but then I'm still like what's his deal, why does he seem to be this secret assassin and everyone should watch out if they happen to cross his path. But anyway I thought there was good interaction and explanations in the story. So I just have one more simple measly request..........PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I have been waiting for another chapter for SO long! I was hoping that this one would lead Kagome back home >D but I guess I will have tp wait for another update lol
Amazing chapter! Loved Nazomi and all the background info on Ai. Can't wait for more!!!!
Anonymous (Chapter 8) - Fri 11 Jan 2013
I absolutely love your story and am glad you have decided to finally update this one. I hope that you will continue to update this particular story on a regular basis from now on. I especially like how you are hinting at the slight possibility of a romance between Kagome and Ai but can you also write a story that clarifies what actually happened to cause the break up between Sesshomaru and Kagome and if Sesshomaru will realize his mistake on his opinion about Kagome's character and if he will try to win her back from Ai and who and when will she choose between the cousins and how will either react when she chooses. I know that this is suppose to be a Sesshomaru and Kagome fanfiction but part of me can't help but hope that she'll choose Ai. But good luck with updating and here's to hoping you update soon.
Stell (Chapter 8) - Fri 11 Jan 2013
... I feel that Kagome should end up with Ai actually... There's hints that he's bad news, but I think that is a bit cliche, setting up that Kagome can't be with anyone that's not Sesshoumaru. Realistically, I think the two of them can be quite compatible, if her gentleness soothes Ai's anger and darkness, and Ai can very easily fall in love with her instead of seeing her as a form of retaliation against Sesshoumaru.
Sesshoumaru is the worst here, he must suspect that Kagome loves him still, as the flashback with Ai shows that he must have been aware of her infatuation. Using the women and deliberately setting out to make her life miserable and crushing her just shows that he has these tendencies. Who could be in a relationship with a person who has no scruples in doing that? It's an abusive situation no matter how you look at it.
It would be better if he could figure out why he feels this antagonism and move on, as Kagome should as well. The most they could hope for is civility. I don't think one can trust a person who has abused them in such a manner. The cowed party will always be submissive. That he might say "I love you" does not erase actions or words spoken harshly. Those leaves an indelible scar on the pysche.
Mina (Chapter 8) - Fri 11 Jan 2013
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Am totally enjoying this! Moreeeeeeeee!
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