Reviews for Panty Thief by Avadrea

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Diane (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Feb 2011
Good story but it does have quite a few word choice goofs & things. A bit of a correction, advisory is a form of advice as in an advisory committee, the word you wanted to use was adversary which means your opponent. Alley & saddled are off too, you wanted ally & sidled. Could probably use going over by a beta, lots of little things like I mentioned are off.

Velvet Sometimes (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Feb 2011

Dude. Ava-Bucket. This is awesome.

I love it! i was LOL-ing the whole time.

Great work! keep it up love! I cant wit to see more from you.


soulNchantress (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Feb 2011

LOL  I'm betting Inuyasha NEVER tells Kagome about this!  Oh to be a fly on the wall when Sesshomaru finds out just what his prize is!!

Good job!


Aurora Antheia Raine (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Feb 2011

HAHAHA. That was hilarious. xD Inuyasha's reaction, Sesshoumaru's curiosity, the way Jaken was just a means to get into Kagome's bag, and just the way you wrote the descriptions overall. I'm SO looking forward to the next chapter. rofl.


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