LOL! Short, sweet and sarcastic.....my three favorite S's!

Wish there was a bit more detail though, but I did enjoy your story

Great way to end it! It was very good.

Yep...you had me from this line... "Well, as satisfied as one youkai with a rubber chicken up his hind end could look." Yep...gonna enjoy these journeys and freakin brilliant by the way! EP

How did i miss this one from you? So glad I found it. You have such a way with words. It is coarse, poetic and funny, and spices up a story so well. 4>---->

Ah yes! Now for part two. It was even better and hotter. I'm always happy whenever Sesshoumaru is the one to be gifted with her virginity. It belongs to no one but him. A lot of stories have been abandoned by me when I get to the part where someone else is given or taken her virginity besides Sesshoumaru. Call me silly but I'm a diehard romantic at heart about that. Too bad you can't combine these two parts and continue on into a delightful romantic romp.

Wow! Very nice indeed! The lemon was extremely erotic and you did an excellent job of creating the right amount of anticipation! I loved the entire story and that it had more going on than just the lemon with a great storyline that kept you reading to see what would happen next. Great job!! :)