please don't be offended by the lack of reviews. i think people are still kind of trying to figure out what's the big picture / where your story may be headed. It's like cannon, but with another story layered on top. Also I could be wrong but I think you just added three chapters all at once (unless I missed an update) - so really you've only had one chapter up for a while. Especially with a story like this one, that appears to be aiming for a very ambitious plotline and an entirely new set of rules to add to the feudal demon era, it may take a bit longer for people to warm up to it. doesn't mean the story won't catch on or that you're not doing a good job :)