Reviews for Out of the Ashes by Lynn

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sesshyskoi (Chapter 4) - Mon 02 Aug 2010

Niice. i love the way you have started off your story! I can't wait until you finish the next chapter!


Amy (Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Aug 2010

Hi, This is a really good story. But I can't find chapter 2. It goes from chapter 1 to chapter 3.

Or is chapter 3 supposed to be chapter 2. I do like the plot of the story, though.


helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 2) - Sat 31 Jul 2010

wow...intense.

so...I'm betting Inuyasha mated Kikyo or something, married Kagome but didn't tell her he was mated, got her pregnant and was gonna have the kid raised by him and Kikyo...or I could be WAY off base but by her reactions to Kikyo it's somewhere along those lines I bet.

 

so...is the kid really hanyou or is he 1/4 demon? I'm hoping for hanyou.

hmmm...so Fluffy's gonna fix Inuyasha's mistakes? like take Kagome for a mate? if she could give him full blooded youkai it'd be really good for him. especially if they have immunity to miko powers.

 

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!


Blackisis (Chapter 2) - Sat 31 Jul 2010

I must  say I cant wait for the next chapter. Looks  like its going to be a good one.


tiana (Chapter 2) - Sat 31 Jul 2010

i enjoyed thiz chpt cant wait to see watz nxt


tiana (Chapter 1) - Sat 31 Jul 2010

i rlly lik how itz goin so far plz update soon


hola (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 Jul 2010
Hey! Constructive criticism: The only thing I can think of, is that some editing needs to be done. Not the story, but for punctuation. There were a few sentences that seemed to lack a period.. Praise: Its off to a good start! It's got my interest for sure! I can almost hear Sesshomaru huffing begrudgingly as he walks over to revive Kagome. Like, he's thinking 'I'm SO going to regret this.'. Haha! :)

sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 Jul 2010

0o0o0o0o0o0o i like this! more please!!


helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 Jul 2010

wait...hanyou? so...her kid's half n half like Inuyasha? does that mean she'd produce full blooded youkai?

 

aww...the baby has her eye color! normally we see the gold as dominate so I'm happy the kid has blue. definately proves he's her son.

 

anyway can hardly wait to see what happens next...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!


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