First thing I would like to say is I love this story. I have read it, re-read it, read it again, and again, and once again, more than again...countless times. I understand how some writers get writers block (me being a writer myself). I don't like to give suggestions on how to proceed with someone else's story because I firmly believe when the writer originally came up with the idea, there was an idea going on and which direction it would take. However, I will tell you the vibe I am getting from what I have read.
Kagome has not gotten over the hurt and is lashing out, but it seems she is coming to understand her son needs his father. It sounds like she is considering a father/son relationship, even if she may or may not have a relationship with the father.
Sesshomaru has no doubt in his mind he really, really screwed up this relationship and wants it back. He also wants a relationship with his son. He has a plan in mind but it wasn't revealed to the readers, lending hope he is wanting to win her back AND have a relationship with his son.
I'm sure this probably didn't help, but I sure would like to know what his PLAN was... ^.^
inunumanuma (Chapter 10) - Thu 14 Jul 2011
i like the story very much, and i know kagome is hurt but she could at least let sess speak his mind about everything and let him be in their son's life even though he did run off >.> but doesnt almost ALMOST usually happen in a teen pregnancy?
>.< ooooh kagome is stubborn! lol please make another chapter sooon!
Gabz (Chapter 1) - Thu 03 Feb 2011
Love this story and can't wait for next chapters..please update soon >.<
missy (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Dec 2010
this is a good, great, wonderful story and i love and like this story since i first started reading this story your a very good wonderful great author who wrote this wonderful good, and really great story.
Bobby (Chapter 6) - Thu 09 Sep 2010
When are you going to write more of this story, PPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeee
Bobby (Chapter 6) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
Wow...... just, Wow
zero1101 (Chapter 6) - Fri 03 Sep 2010
Kagome grow up some more, at least he wants to be in the boys life now. Don't get mad when he forgets you and goes to someone else which I'm sure you will, it's an okay chapter butinuyasha Kagome's making me mad by now.
Bobby (Chapter 4) - Thu 02 Sep 2010
AWSOME, Please keep writing
zero1101 (Chapter 5) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
G damnit woman! Just let him see the kid and be in his life! Why can't Kagome just let him, I mean yeah sure, he hurt HER not THEIR kid. Stupid woman
(not u, Kagome)
tiana (Chapter 5) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
i rlly enjoy thiz story so far cant wait to c watz nxt update soon plz.
I LOVEEEE IT ! I wish she would hurry up and tell Inuyasha though ! I think he would love little Malakai :) CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE !
Missing me (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Aug 2010
Love the story!
alatera (Chapter 4) - Sun 08 Aug 2010
This is a great story still from the first time I read it . Its very interesting and I cant wait to se what you do with it once it catches up to where it left off.
The whole time I read this story I'm on the edge of my seat. It's so good! Can't wait to see what happens next!
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 3) - Thu 05 Aug 2010
so...this is that other story then...I hope you continue it more then ff dot net had on for a while.
anyway...so...he thinks of it as a 'falling out' does that mean he doesn't think they broke up or not?
what does he see her as? like a potential mate? does Malakai look like a youkai even though he's technically a hanyou?
is Sesshomaru the heir to the Western Lands? because if so it appears she doesn't know...does she even know his and Inuyasha's family? hmmm...wonder when Sesshomaru will go too far and she brings in Inutashio.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
zero1101 (Chapter 3) - Wed 04 Aug 2010
She should've know he would find out, can't really keep a kid a secret forever kagome.
fluffytuffy18 (Chapter 3) - Wed 04 Aug 2010
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I believe it's not wise to keep an eager reader on the edge of her seat !
tiana (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Jul 2010
i rlly enjoyed thiz chpt keep up the nice work update soon plz
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 1) - Wed 28 Jul 2010
is this a repost because I think a long time ago I read a similar one on ff dot net...if it is I definately was hoping it would be updated.
if it isn't I still loved the chappie and definately want to see an update.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
man is Fluffy a craddle robber
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