I seriously couldn't stop giggling, poor Sess haha. Keep up the good work and write more!
(This is my third time trying to post a review, apparently I keep typoing Inuyasha, because I was giggling)
Oh God AWESOME!
Karli (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Jul 2010
pouting like a child sorry that bit just made me giggle.
im not one for Constructive Criticism dont ask im just not. if a story makes me laugh in the first chapter then its ok
I hope you keep up the great work and dont let the plunny hit you too hard ok
Haha, poor Sesshomaru. That must have been a great start to her day, seeing him in such a sticky situation. Good job
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