| Beautifully written!  Everything flowed so nicely together.  I absolutely loved it.  Not only did you write from Kagomes POV but by the way you included the other characters you created one hell of a great story.  I also loved how it all built up to something sweet and romantic.  I can't wait to read "Another Update"; which hopefully I can get to before I head to bed.  Anyways, great job!
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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