Wait....... I'm confused about chapter two. I think you posted the wrong one? or maybe I'm just tweakin'.
I like the way you recounted Sesshomaru's agreement with InuYasha to watch over Kagome. The detail about Inu's penmanship was cute and probably well-founded. I find it hard to believe that InuYasha would be terribly literate. Then the way you told about Sesshomaru watching over Kagome was logical, detailed and touching. Though I had my doubts about the club scene, I enjoyed the clear lucidity of Kagome's emotions at the end of the chapter. I hope you write more.
I loved this little one shot, a bit out of character for Sesshomaru, but thats not necessarily a bad thing!! A sequeal to this would be much appreciated!!LoL
Aw, I like that, it's so sweet!
This was a fun read Neva...500yrs to see her again and he walks away with a kiss. I swear that demon has got some nerve but you gotta love his swanky ways.
| | | | 