Excellent writing!  Battle scenes are hard, and you made it so I could picture everything that happened.  
      
jane (Chapter 2) - Fri 05 Mar 2010 
ah! its really getting good. whats going to happen next? i hope sesshoumaru and kagome can finally be together. keep up the good work :) 
      
Very interesting! I've been sad over a lack of new chapter stories that have caught my attention, but this one seems to have done it. I hope you keep it up! 
      
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Mar 2010 
i love your story! its so detailed and i feel like the relationship between kagome and sesshoumaru is just blossoming beautifully. can't wait for the next chapter! 
      
Excellent! 
      
First I loved your level of description in this and the insights into the characters.  Using music to bring Sesshoumaru and Kagome together was a clever plot device. I love the idea of them quietly becoming closer through sharing bathing and other interests.  That slow steady building of a rapport between them made the first kiss and other encounters much more meaningful.  When you had him rescue her at the end of the chapter it was a perfect ending to a nice gradual and very smoldering buildup. 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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