oh ho ho! i gets it now! :: sad face anyway :: poor Kagome, and Inuaysha gah stupid mutt, still picked Kikyo in the end. :l gah *flicks him thusly* on to the next chapter!
o.o okay this doenst make any kinda sense.
Chapter 10 seems out of places with chapters 1 - 9 was this from another story or a misplaced chapter? cause in chapter 9 you have kagome running away from Sesshmaru after he asked her to mate him, and inuki was alive and well up until that point.
but chapter 10, you have inuki dead, as a miscarrage, kagoem drowned, and now becoming part of Sesshomaru's clan and care?
@_@ i'm confused.
That's a great plot twist! I didn't see it coming, but it gives everything else an explanation, even the circa-1910, pseudo-European vibes of Sesshomaru's supposed household. Excellent!
Nuoooo!! You said it had a nice ending! This had better not be the end!
kimiko doll (Chapter 9) - Thu 18 Feb 2010
awww this dissapints me. it needs a sequel. theres more that needs to be done. please don't give up on this story, continue please. T_______T
When I came to end, I wanted more! That short story was lovely. I'll have to check up on any other stories you've written! Good luck on future projects!
is that it???
awwww, i like thisstory. it is well done. I like how the plot is and it was done well...good job with the story.
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