I enjoyed the way these progressed. Its not easy to do that seamlessly with drabbles, but you mannaged to pull that off very well! I think my fave was thefirst. That little insight into Sesshomaru was just heart melting. I love how worried he was about Kagome and how much we wanted to protect her. Again, where you managed to get a deep detail expressed in so few words. Often times authors take a long time to get a point across because they want to be thorough, but sometimes the impact is lessened as the effectiveness of word use is lost. I enjoy these drabbles because they are exemplaray of cases where sometimes less is more.
Ikaru (Chapter 5) - Mon 20 Sep 2010
This was a lovey piece, everything was short but it painted the progression of his feelings well. It was truely a joy to read, I'll look foreward to more of your work in the future!
Aaahhh! That was soo cute, I loved it. It wasn't elaborate just short and sweet. It showed the progression of his feelings and the realization of what his life should be. I love that he finally realized how fortunate he was to have the sword he was given and the fact that he finally understands that without people to share it with all the wealth and power in the world means nothing.
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