That was a great start! Where is the next chapter? Why haven't you updated? You have me really interested in what happens next, please write more to this story.
keira (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Sep 2009
| hey cool story but i noticed you haven't updated in awhile so can you please update soon i would realy like to read more... pleeeaaase^^
jackie (Chapter 1) - Mon 31 Aug 2009
| this is really good!!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Clawfang~from deviantart.com (Chapter 1) - Sun 15 Mar 2009
| I like the story, please update it soon I can't wait for the next chapter.
tina (Chapter 1) - Fri 16 Jan 2009
a very good start , this story has great potential , if you would like someone to do some mild editing I would be happy to help you with all that I can , I look forward to updates either way
Please update soon. I really like this story so far. I don't understand why so few people of chosen to read it. It really is good.
| Where's the update?
danni (Chapter 1) - Tue 13 May 2008
| i really like ur story so far^o^ i hope u will continue with it:D cool story cover also
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