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Young Kagome (Chapter 35) - Thu 06 Oct 2022

I don't think I like Kagome and Sesshomarus relationship. I think she'll be much happier with someone else. They just don't seem to like each other much. A friends with benefits situation. She should be with someone who loves her!!!


SmilingFool (Chapter 35) - Wed 05 Oct 2022

Wow that was great loved it....  Yeah not getting a lot of reviews suck hell I usually get one or two by miracle but I write, had them up for years not even finished with them yet.  I have seven fingers to type so its slow go.  LOL  Yeah I make fun of myself all the time because like you I'm a happy goofy person that hates to be normal gosh I really hate the word.  LOL   Now back to my review.  I loved the flow and comentary between Kagome and Sesshomaru they are a perfect couple and I don't think Sesshomaru should marry Kagome until the curse is over just in case.  But for some reason I may be mixing up something here. 

I do remember reading this story years ago only remember up until the curse was removed you fixed quite a bit of this story even making it funnier than before.  Only bits and pieces come back to me but I could never forget a wonderful story as this.  I love the fact Kagome is pregnant again with Sesshomaru's child.  The part I enjoyed was Natsumoto running around saying a strange princess has powers destroying lands, seizing power with magical eyes.   How funny is that, oh my I never liked him, he was an ass waiting to be stabbed well he was beheaded and thankfully Sesshomaru made it happen less work to do now that he's dead.  But I wonder why he attacked her when she did nothing to him?  In any case, I hope all those stories about Kagome don't cause a problem for her in the future.

Love how everyone enjoys Kagomes smell, and I wonder if she will stop at Jiji's before going home.  When will the monks from the Temple of Light stop by Kagome's castle?  I want them to see Kuro and see for themselves if it is him or not, I also have a distant memory of Kagome out on the land somewhere and she feels Kuro's presence but also Naraku's and rushes off to find him before their enemy does.  Man sometime I hate my mind and memories and I do have a habit of mixing some stories with others but I know I am correct on this just don't remember much after that.

I was hoping for a hot spring scene with Sesshomaru and Kagome, perhaps next chapter.  Kagome needs to get one of her advisors to do the paper work so she can glance at it to make sure like what Sesshomaru mentioned about giving/building castles to the idiots before signing.  Wonder what kind of reception Kagome will get when she returns....  LOL can't wait to see how people react and find out how Kagura is doing.  Hopefully she is well she might even give Kagome answers she seeks.

 

As I've said many times I loved the chapter and this story rocks.  And it does...  Hopefully people will leave reviews...  If not I gift them a virtual wedgie...  LOL until next time.


Young Kagome (Chapter 34) - Tue 27 Sep 2022

I forgot about Kikyo lol


SmilingFool (Chapter 34) - Sun 25 Sep 2022

Oh man this was some crazy shit going down....   At the beginning I didn't know why a tv was even mentioned when Kagome brought her mother and brother over from the future.  Then the talking of antennae and not having something to watch I figured that was all about the loss of Kagura and not knowing where she is.

Then the strange battle at the village.  Were they part of Sagisoto's troop?  Hopefully Kagome will get some answers. Oh and Kikyo asking for help from Sesshomaru giving him information he already had and how she tried to say Kagome was going to attack him while being in the south western village.  How did Kikyou know?  Anyways, trying to manipulate Sesshomaru into Killing Kagome because of her new found powers is rediculous.  I'm glad Sesshomaru sprayed Kikyo with his poison hopefully it eats and destroys her after what she's done to Inu Yasha and Kagome...  Can't wait until this topic comes up when speaking with Kagome.

 

Loved the chapter thank you so much for posting it....


Niecy (Chapter 33) - Sat 17 Sep 2022

Amazed as ever...I feel I have to stop reading so fast because I get depressed when it's over lol. Keep up the work and I will always pray for your health and happiness. Til next time


SmilingFool (Chapter 33) - Tue 13 Sep 2022

Wow, that was awesome....  You must know what this story does for my boring life, I feel happy and energetic when I read the lastest chapter even though its about war there are parts that make it funny and serious at the same time.  Leave it to Kagome to start something new to scare the hell out of her troups...  LOL  afraid of a barrier people...  Hahaa good one there.

I'm glad they caught Kagura poor female has been through hell and Naraku was enjoying the havoc she had done and spied the lands she destroyed.  Now that Kagura is under Kagome's care she will be able to find out what is going on in that camp of Naraku and Sagisoto hope I spelled that correctly.

I miss Jiji and Kagome's mother wonder if she is pregnant?  Didn't answer that one or wrote anything more on that since Kagome mentioned it a few chapters back.  What poisons will Kagome get from Jiji?  Wonder what Sin thinks about Kagome and Sesshomaru?  Boy was that funny when everyone at the camp wanted to kill Sin for touching Kagome like he did. ???????? Too good.

Kazi and Kagome make great friends, love how they banter and how Kazi loves to tease Kagome on certain matters.  Hell I choked on my taco???? laughing when Sin was walking through camp and the way Kazi noted another love interest...  and the soldiers looked at him with murder in there eyes.  I just couldn't help but laugh thinking about when Sin kept teasing Kagome when she and Shippo still lived in the cave.  Boy wonder what the soldiers would have done then...  Poor Sin he never gets a break.

Its sad what happened to Kagura being raped and used like she was and I'm sure Sesshomaru is glad that he no longer has to worry about Kagura.  I really do think Sesshomaru and Kagome make an awesome couple and how they teamed together to fight this war.  I haven't heard anything about Koga or his wovles.  Wonder if you will make a cameo appearance with him and his antics, boy that would but something to read and so much fun.

Anyways, I loved this chapter so many things happening made this story one of the greats, I will keep for my lifetime.  Can't wait to read more.  Hope schooling is going good for you....  Stay safe and happy until next time.


Young Kagome (Chapter 33) - Tue 13 Sep 2022

I don't understand some things unless I reread it a few times. Like this last conversation between Kagome and Kazi, I didn't understand what bringing up Jiji meant. I'm glad they're treating Kagura nicely. Though I don't understand how Kagome knew what was going on. Please update soon!


Fubuki (Chapter 33) - Mon 12 Sep 2022

Thankyou, this new chapter managed to distract me from getting ready for work! but well worth the read, 

Fubuki


Cata (Chapter 32) - Wed 31 Aug 2022

Aww,no updates !I want moore!

Juste wanted to tell you, that is been a while that I readed à good story fic.and I apreciate it very much.

I assume that your health is not very good, from what I understood between chapters and just wanted to wish you good health and stay strong.  

Back to story, will Kagome get pregnant after theirs romp in the sheets? Will Shessy want her for more than heir maker ?Soo much questions !!!

 

Ps:sorry for the spelling,cuz enghlish is not my first language,just so you know,someone like me,is folowing your story from France. 

 


REDWOLF (Chapter 32) - Tue 30 Aug 2022

This is one fantastic fic!! I read this entire fic  over the last few days and I just get so excited to see a new chapter posted! I usually don't start a long story until it is finished because it saddening me when it doesn't get done. Please keep up the wonderful work!


Pfairy (Chapter 32) - Mon 29 Aug 2022

Welcome back! I was so happy to see the update. I loved it! Looking forward to what happens next! Wishing you the best. Take care!


Fubuki (Chapter 32) - Sat 27 Aug 2022

Grumble, grumble! copy, cut delete paste! Thankyou for the update :)  not too sure about the rearrangement of the chapters not too good when tipsy but all is done, and ready for a re-read. Keep up the good work, don't forget to rest the wrist, and feed the plot bunnies, just not purple snake with black marks. and looking forward to the next chapter

Rosemarie


SmilingFool (Chapter 31) - Fri 26 Aug 2022

Ah ha this makes more sense when followed with the now chap 32...  LOL I loved it... Got to say this story is never boring and I love the word eyan used discribing yokai meat.  I know its also a boys name and means 'To feel the graciousness of God.'  Makes me think of Kuro...  I'm just glad Naraku or Sagisoto had not got to him.  I would feel so sad if they did.  I adore how Kagome cares and loves him such a sweet baby....  Oh and forgot to mention Kagome's mom and Jiji, are they a couple now?  Is she pregnant?  Man I'd be happy for them if they were.  I can't wait for more on this story One of the Great One's out there....  Until next time...


Midnight7 (Chapter 32) - Thu 25 Aug 2022

Yes yes yes!! So glad you added in an extra chapter. That made it flow so much better. I really love this story and your writing style. The extra chapter made it feel less rushed and more informative. I can't wait for the next update. 


Maurice (Chapter 30) - Thu 25 Aug 2022

YAY!!! Welcome back!! I did a double take when I saw the update :) Your health is #1 priority so I wish you the best on your health. As always, your story-telling is on point and I'm glad to see the story progressing again. :) Take Care


Young Kagome (Chapter 31) - Tue 16 Aug 2022

Wow I'm enjoying this more than I thought I would!! I really REALLY wish she could have some more romance with Sin before we start on her and Sesshomaru. Or even during lol I don't mind I just love them together. But Sesshomaru is always end game! It's a bunch of drama always for our girl, I can't wait to see how she gets through it! Please update soon! 


Midnight7 (Chapter 31) - Sun 14 Aug 2022

So I was super happy to see an update. I really liked the chapter and what was going on, but I feel like we missed a chapter or something. Went from her going to spank someone over a map to already fighting. Plus last time her and Sess was together they got into it so from going from that to them like this was strange. And it didn't flow like the story normally does with your writing style. Don't get me wrong I did like the chapter it just felt like something was missing. I hope I explained that okay. 


SmilingFool (Chapter 31) - Sat 13 Aug 2022

No worries the chapter was awesome I loved it and how crazy Kagome got by eating snake...  LOL Poor Sesshomaru didn't know if he was coming or going with how nutty she was acting but in the end they both enjoyed each other and Kazi man she's a trip bet she get a lot of pointers or give pointers to Miroku should she ever meet them. 

 

Okay the question I do have is where is Sota since Kagome's mother is with Jiji.  I'm glad they haven't found her or Kuro but if Kagura see's her then surely Naraku will know.  Kagome should raly the monks to help fight in the war since Naraku is afraid of them joining forces.  Wonder where Inu Yasha, Sango and Miroku are along with the dead miko.

 

Can't wait to read more this was fun to read.


SmilingFool (Chapter 30) - Fri 12 Aug 2022

OMG Loved the update.... I've waited so long for this and you didn't disapoint.  I'm glad your feeling better I had to read the story again to get reaquainted with it took me a couple of days and I just finished the newest chapter.  Man that was good really good I enjoyed the story all over again and I can't wait to read more.  Thank you so much...


Lexy217 (Chapter 30) - Wed 10 Aug 2022

So glad you are back writing! Hope you health continues getting better! 


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