sesshomaru is such a JERK. kagome is human, he could have waited, he could have just freaken waited! if he love her he would have stayed by her till she died not go off and make her a second mate even if she gave him her permisson! that jerk! great story, i nearly cried when i read it. your writting was great too. sesshomaru may be hot, extremly hot but he is ssssooooo a great big jerk. he could have waited. nice story and sorry for my rampage. :)

u need to make a secound one on how sesshoumaru took her death. even if it is short

Wow... This moved me to tears... You wrote them pretty well. Kagome seemed very in-character, and the action between the two went very well. Very bittersweet short.