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Together again. Finally. Now she can heal. Great story. 

Finally found her! 

Oh wow! That hit her so hard! I'm glad her friends were there to help. 

Uhoh! They should have told them she couldn't have alcohol! What kind of jerk gives someone a spiked drink when they can't drink alcohol! My husband gets violently ill from drinking any alcohol, so I have a different POV. 

She is lucky to have such a wonderful brother. 

Oh that is terrible! I sure hope it wasn't Kagome who hit him. 

Oh boy...not good! Talk about spiraling. 

Awww...I hate a depressed Kagome. And an addicted one. Hope she finds her cure soon.