Oh boy, I can tell this version of Kagome is an idiot and is going to make her life unnecessarily difficult from poor decisions. Sleeping with Sesshomaru will beget a hanyou...how is this supposed to fool inuyasha into thinking that child is his?? Children don't save marriages so clearly her relationship with inu is on it's last leg. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Strong start. I wonder what we will see bloom from the dark feelings.
This story is hot. I am unbelievably curious as to what the real plot of the story is...I am also not in a hurry to know since the interludes between Sesshomaru and Kagome give insight to their current predicament. I can't wait for the next update.
Hm wonder if you will post the same as the original story line? I enjoy the story so I wonder how this one will differ.
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