Reviews for Betrayal by LibraCourt

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Tana_san (Chapter 22) - Thu 19 Dec 2024

It's been so long since I've read this, so when I saw the update I remembered most of it but re read all of it. I just loved how BAD you mad our sweet, loving Rin. She was THE perfect antagonist in this fiction. We know her so called friends egged her on and she being the gullible, native, girl true to character, believed there were actually befriending her for her and it was going to last her lifetime. What girl doesn't want that? But that is not a reality. Friends do NOT always last forever.

I loved every romantic interlude. You write great sex!  And I love Sessh's beasty...especially when he sneakily took over Sesshoumaru, had sex with Kagome and left Sessh feeling after sex tired

I also cried my eyes blind when both Rin and Sesshoumaru let Kagome leave. Sessh had to know she was serious and that fool asked for a paternity test. His primal side was all on top of that now, huh?

I also cried over the wasted lose of young life but they were warned and Abi's mother told about messing with inu so she knew better and roped the others into it too. And Rin pasted out!!! She saw death first hand and just blacked out. She also knew not to mess with an inu. She was warned by 2 of them. Man, how stupid can one be?!?

So, I'm loving this all and can't wait for more. Have a wonderful Merry Christmas and Great New Year. May it bring you many blessings and time to do the things you're wanting to get done.  Jen  (sorry for any errors, typing on a cell not my forte)

 

 


Tana_san (Chapter 22) - Thu 19 Dec 2024

It's been so long since I've read this, so when I saw the update I remembered most of it but re read all of it. I just loved how BAD you mad our sweet, loving Rin. She was THE perfect antagonist in this fiction. We know her so called friends egged her on and she being the gullible, native, girl true to character, believed there were actually befriending her for her and it was going to last her lifetime. What girl doesn't want that? But that is not a reality. Friends do NOT always last forever.

I loved every romantic interlude. You write great sex!  And I love Sessh's beasty...especially when he sneakily took over Sesshoumaru, had sex with Kagome and left Sessh feeling after sex tired

I also cried my eyes blind when both Rin and Sesshoumaru let Kagome leave. Sessh had to know she was serious and that fool asked for a paternity test. His primal side was all on top of that now, huh?

I also cried over the wasted lose of young life but they were warned and Abi's mother told about messing with inu so she knew better and roped the others into it too. And Rin pasted out!!! She saw death first hand and just blacked out. She also knew not to mess with an inu. She was warned by 2 of them. Man, how stupid can one be?!?

So, I'm loving this all and can't wait for more. Have a wonderful Merry Christmas and Great New Year. May it bring you many blessings and time to do the things you're wanting to get done.  Jen  (sorry for any errors, typing on a cell not my forte)

 

 


Tana_san (Chapter 22) - Thu 19 Dec 2024

It's been so long since I've read this, so when I saw the update I remembered most of it but re read all of it. I just loved how BAD you mad our sweet, loving Rin. She was THE perfect antagonist in this fiction. We know her so called friends egged her on and she being the gullible, native, girl true to character, believed there were actually befriending her for her and it was going to last her lifetime. What girl doesn't want that? But that is not a reality. Friends do NOT always last forever.

I loved every romantic interlude. You write great sex!  And I love Sessh's beasty...especially when he sneakily took over Sesshoumaru, had sex with Kagome and left Sessh feeling after sex tired

I also cried my eyes blind when both Rin and Sesshoumaru let Kagome leave. Sessh had to know she was serious and that fool asked for a paternity test. His primal side was all on top of that now, huh?

I also cried over the wasted lose of young life but they were warned and Abi's mother told about messing with inu so she knew better and roped the others into it too. And Rin pasted out!!! She saw death first hand and just blacked out. She also knew not to mess with an inu. She was warned by 2 of them. Man, how stupid can one be?!?

So, I'm loving this all and can't wait for more. Have a wonderful Merry Christmas and Great New Year. May it bring you many blessings and time to do the things you're wanting to get done.  Jen  (sorry for any errors, typing on a cell not my forte)

 

 


Tana_san (Chapter 22) - Thu 19 Dec 2024

It's been so long since I've read this, so when I saw the update I remembered most of it but re read all of it. I just loved how BAD you mad our sweet, loving Rin. She was THE perfect antagonist in this fiction. We know her so called friends egged her on and she being the gullible, native, girl true to character, believed there were actually befriending her for her and it was going to last her lifetime. What girl doesn't want that? But that is not a reality. Friends do NOT always last forever.

I loved every romantic interlude. You write great sex!  And I love Sessh's beasty...especially when he sneakily took over Sesshoumaru, had sex with Kagome and left Sessh feeling after sex tired

I also cried my eyes blind when both Rin and Sesshoumaru let Kagome leave. Sessh had to know she was serious and that fool asked for a paternity test. His primal side was all on top of that now, huh?

I also cried over the wasted lose of young life but they were warned and Abi's mother told about messing with inu so she knew better and roped the others into it too. And Rin pasted out!!! She saw death first hand and just blacked out. She also knew not to mess with an inu. She was warned by 2 of them. Man, how stupid can one be?!?

So, I'm loving this all and can't wait for more. Have a wonderful Merry Christmas and Great New Year. May it bring you many blessings and time to do the things you're wanting to get done.  Jen  (sorry for any errors, typing on a cell not my forte)

 

 


Tai (Chapter 22) - Sun 15 Dec 2024

Thank you for the fun updates! Love this story and sad that it seems to be at an end soon!


cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 22) - Thu 12 Dec 2024

Valla tenias que desgraciarlo que mala eres, que pasa que Kagome no puede salvarle el brazo con sus poderes ho esque en esta historia no tiene poderes de sacerdotisa valla asco


Anonymous (Chapter 22) - Wed 11 Dec 2024

I was thrilled to see an update for this and that it was two chapters! Glad to know you are well, and you have my sympathy for the kid troubles. 

I'm a bit perturbed that Rin gets off as easy as she did when the other girls get slain. Abi was a piece of work for sure, but misguided as it was she had a motive for this and was hurting what she thought of as an enemy. Rin however, completely betrayed the person who saved her, took her in, and gave her a cushy life. And for absolutely no reason other than being a selfish, jealous little brat who wanted to play mean girl games with the popular girls. She did this to her father and his girlfriend who were nothing but good to her and wouldn't stop even when she saw what it was doing to them and despite being given several chances. She didnt care at all that she was dragging her former close friend's family into it and harming them either. That says something about her character/personality that is even worse than those girls who were going after people they didn't know or care about. None of this could have happened if Rin hadn't not only chosen to act like this but repeatedly refused to stop. She is by far the worst offender in this situation, but she is the only one who isn't killed for it. Then to top it off she is still being provided for and living with Toga! Why did he take her in after the ruin she caused?! They should have booted her spiteful ungrateful ass to an orphanage/foster home at least. Just doesn't seem at all fair to me.

Toga sure wasn't thinking when he sent Sesshomaru home like that. Not very bright to send him to the place he has such unhappy memories of with nothing to do but stew on it. Hmm, well I guess he couldn't bring him home with him since he took in the backstabber. Ugh. 

I had a feeling something bad would happen to him once he started burning the house down. I admit though the whole time I was reading that scene I kept thinking, " Dude, why didn't you just move out?! You're wealthy, there's no need for this just sell it and buy a new one!" I certainly wouldn't want to keep living there if it were me. I guess it was part of his need to punish himself though.

I'm glad they got back together. I do wonder what the criteria was for her to be called if this hadn't happened. Like how long would she have been waiting otherwise? The longer it took the older she was getting and also the longer their son went without a father. So what were the conditions he was supposed to wait for before he called Kagome to return to Sesshomaru?

I am excited to see what happens when he moves in with her and their son. I hope he doesn't self-sabotage with all the "I don't deserve this" attitude. Because it doesn't really matter if he deserves it, Kagome deserves to finally be happy with her mate and their son deserves a father who resolves to do better instead of wallow. Speaking of their son,  he's an interesting little guy. I hope you explore how his unique status. 

Thanks for the chapters. They are always entertaining and very engaging. Hope the kiddos behave better for you. But the holidays are coming so...I can wait. Just glad your alright, after covid I started to worry something bad happened to a writer when it was a long time in between updates instead of just assuming they were busy or lost interest in writing like I used to think.


SmilingFool (Chapter 22) - Tue 10 Dec 2024

Oh man those were so dramatic, sad and loving chapters.  Loved them  


REDWOLF (Chapter 22) - Mon 09 Dec 2024

Why doesn't Kagome heal him? Come on,  he gets it back in the series.


Azuraskye21 (Chapter 20) - Sun 08 Dec 2024

I keep checking for any updates, but has been awhile. Hope all is okay


REDWOLF (Chapter 20) - Fri 29 Nov 2024

I hope you update soon because this drama just got good!


REDWOLF (Chapter 20) - Fri 29 Nov 2024

I hope you update soon because this drama just got good!


REDWOLF (Chapter 20) - Fri 29 Nov 2024

I hope you update soon because this drama just got good!


Anonymous (Chapter 20) - Sat 07 Sep 2024

Love this


Lauren (Chapter 20) - Mon 02 Sep 2024

I can't believe she really didn't confess. That's insane. What good was it to keep up the lie when Sesshomaru knew?? And what did he carve into her chest? What the hell is Abi doing there???? 

 

Guessing Yoko is driving Kagome to Inuyasha's house? It makes sense because he can help Kagome through the pregnancy and with the baby and it would help cut down on gossip since the kid will look like him. 


Lauren (Chapter 11) - Mon 02 Sep 2024

I'm glad you had Kagome confess everything to Inu Papa and that the demon agrees with her. Maybe he'll lay some traps at home 


Lauren (Chapter 9) - Mon 02 Sep 2024

It's sad to see how bitter and presumptive Rin is being, all because she lacks self-confidence and assuredness in herself. Being a teenager accounts for a little rebellion and attitude but to completely mischaracterize someone is intentional 


Jennifer (Chapter 20) - Fri 30 Aug 2024

What a bastard! Sesshomaru deserves Kagome leaving anf making him sign away his rights! And Rin and those girls deserve everything they are going to get! But who the hell is ABI?!


Anonymous (Chapter 20) - Wed 28 Aug 2024

Abbi ????


Anonymous (Chapter 20) - Wed 28 Aug 2024

Abbi ????


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