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bookgirl813 (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 May 2021

Ooooh, I like this. I'm intrigued by how you took a risk in just going right for the first meet up with Sesshomaru without a chapter or more just to introduce the story. It works. 


kaoruhana (Chapter 9) - Fri 28 May 2021

Okay, all caught up.  I should have taken notes as I went along, so please excuse the way this review may be jumping around scenes and chapters as I try to remember everything I wanted to say.  

I kind of like the home Sesshomaru, and Kagome, and Kouga have.  It's a really neat set-up.  My one question though, and it's likely because I somehow missed it in my reading, where are they location wise?  I feel like you mentioned it, and I missed it, and I feel terrible as a reader for missing that fact, but I can't remember!  

There is Snow Patrol mentioned in this story?  Are you kidding me?  One of my favorite bands in this story?  I'm crying happy tears right now.  

So, I actually skipped reading most of the smut when reading today, so I'll have to catch up on those parts later.  But what I did read, I liked.  

I know Sesshomaru's stripes being sensitive is something I've read before, but I kind of liked your explanation of why certain areas are more sensitive than others.  It just made sense, and I liked your interpretation of it.  I actually kind of want to maybe borrow that idea for the soulmate story I'm writing.  

Also: whoever that creep is (I don't know why, but that Suzu guy who works directly under Inuyasha gives me Naraku/Onigumo vibes) needs to be caught soon.  I can't even imagine how vioalted Kagome feels.  It actually makes me shudder.  

As for her past with Inuyasha: I can see why it would be so traumatizing to her.  And I really do feel sympathy for her for having to go through that.  The fact that she became a stronger person, and managed to move on from that trauma is amazing.  (And I also like how Kouga helped her and now really really want to know what he did to help her, because I just think it would be interesting to read).  

I was a wee bit annoyed at her for getting mad at Sesshomaru regarding his mother, but then I did understand where she was coming from.  I think (and this is because I love slow burn and angst so please feel free to ignore this), it would have been nice to see a bit more of that scene: why she's angry and frustrated, what his reactions are, etc.  

And yay!  Mated!  I love how he went to Shippo and Kouga for help!  That was really sweet of him.  

I think I covered all I wanted to (I'm sure I forgot something though, and I'll remember later), and look forward to reading more.  

Oh, and in case I haven't mentioned it yet: the concept of the Order is really really unique, and I'm really enjoying the idea of it and seeing where you go with it.  

Also, if you add any more Snow Patrol (or Bastille) songs, I may just be excited.  


Valasaurus (Chapter 9) - Fri 28 May 2021

I'm so glad they were finally able to mate! I just hope Inuyasha not that Naraku knock off will get in the way of their happiness


kaoruhana (Chapter 1) - Thu 27 May 2021

I haven't finished reading the first chapter yet, but I wanted to jot down some words.  I really like your Kagome and how she's really assertive.  I'm also enjoying reading her interaction with Koga, and I like how comfortable it looks to us readers.  And I'm really liking how you take the time to write little details in your story: the voice coming from the speakers of her phone, the explanation of the poison. Now off to read more.  


SmilingFool (Chapter 9) - Thu 27 May 2021

Wow I so loved that chapter the songs were perfect addition to this chapter.  Thank you...  I am glad they mated now there is no way for anyone to come between the two not even Inu Yasha.  Though I am still courous about Suzu?  Is he the one that's absorbing the yokai?  Anyhow I loved this chapter can't believe they are mates...  Woo hoo!!!  Thank you again for a wonderful chapter.


DeathDagger (Chapter 9) - Thu 27 May 2021

Awww snaps! I don't think certain people are gonna like that he's inside her head now. You can mute her reiki but not the part of her soul that is interwoven with him...


DeathDagger (Chapter 7) - Thu 27 May 2021

Yes! Kimiko for the win! And can we take a moment for the epic smack down that was the table scene. Now we just need Sesshy to flex and I'm good lol


DeathDagger (Chapter 6) - Thu 27 May 2021

Somehow I knew that broad was gonna make it in the story!


D (Chapter 1) - Fri 21 May 2021

Omg what a wonderful story. I like how you sprinkle in their jobs but its not the main focus. Your timeline and flow is so seemless i am never lost. Those lemons are so juicy got me making lemonade over here . Thank you for this of a story jem


Valasaurus (Chapter 8) - Fri 21 May 2021

Why do I have the feeling that Inuyasha is somehow involved with the absorptions. I also hope this won't interrupt Kags reunion with her family


SmilingFool (Chapter 8) - Thu 20 May 2021

Oh my oh my Sesshomaru's mother let out a doozy on that trail of missing yokai wow more than one tried becoming Naraku and possibly absorbing spiritual abilities damn that bites....  Hey question for ya?  Why did Sesshomaru sniff this Sozu guy at the office?  Did he sense something that the others hadn't like maybe he's the one spying on Kagome?  Poor Inu Yasha yeah the dude needs a vacation and probably another miko hanyo that would have him fall for her and possibly leave Kagome alone.  Sad things are happening when Kagome is close to reunting with her family hopfully the bad guys don't find out...  I'd hate for her to be in sad if something happens to them before that happens.  Anyways as always love the story can't get enough to read I'll have to read this over once again because my brain needs to feed on the wonderful words you write....  Woo hoo great chapter two thumbs up and a dozen digital cookies for you for mentioning us reviewers... That's awesome thanks....  update soon.


SmilingFool (Chapter 7) - Sat 15 May 2021

Oh that was a damn good chapter loved it.  Still wonder if its Inu Yasha or that yokai that attacked Kagome while pregnant?  Can't remember if they found and killed him.  But that may be why he keeps going to her, yeah I know its farfetched but can't see a human jumping up a tree  it would take them time to climb the feed would have that on it....  Oh well hopefully the wards against yokai will help,.,.,  Loved what Kagome did to Inu Yasha serves him right for being an ass.  Oh the elevator going to be a big talk amongst the office...  Can't wait to see what happens with that...   lol


SmilingFool (Chapter 6) - Mon 10 May 2021

Well we know Inu Yasha remains an ass always chasing shadows of of Kikyo never looking forward poor Kagome at least now he's out of the picture and Sesshomaru proudly stands where his and Kagome's future begins...  Woo hoo loved the chapter and the awesome relationship you built around Koga, Shippo, Kagome and Sesshomaru they are awesome together.... 


SmilingFool (Chapter 5) - Thu 06 May 2021

That was an awesome chapter loved it....  Can't wait to read more.


SmilingFool (Chapter 4) - Wed 05 May 2021

I wondered if it were Inu Yasha that had been showing up at their place but then the lady said them meaning more than one..  So who could it be spying on Kagome and dodging the cameras?  Finally the tip toeing is no more.  Sesshomaru and Kagome finally let it be known their in for the long haul...  LOL Can't wait to read more. 


Lady T (Chapter 3) - Mon 03 May 2021

Love love love so far!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next?  Super curious what Inu did this time?  Looking forward to an update!!!


Denise (Chapter 3) - Thu 29 Apr 2021

Ohhh of course she wants the stuffed dog????♥?Thanks for that cute scene♥?


SmilingFool (Chapter 3) - Wed 28 Apr 2021

Damn they keep dancing around one another lol to damn funny talk about sexual frustrations...  What I want to know is what Inu Yasha had done to make Kagome and others hate him....  Oh do give details....


Rodneya (Chapter 2) - Thu 22 Apr 2021

I very much appreciate the blueprint


SmilingFool (Chapter 2) - Thu 22 Apr 2021

Awe too cute loved it.  It seems they are going to be great friends although I do want to know what Inu Yasha had done to cause a fall out 300 years ago....  


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