Well now, what an intriguing story! I love that it's not all spice, but also really mature, though tough at times, convos and innder dialogue. Excited to see what happens next! And how fun would it be if our dear Kagome becomes more dominate, with Sessh realizing he likes submitting at times to her? Oh well! Whichever way this goes, I'm in!
So wait, why did Sango bring Kagome to a kink party if she knew she wasn't into it?? If my friend was scared of that kind of stuff I wouldn't drag her somewhere AND THEN LEAVE HER THERE and let a complete stranger take her home, other than that, the story is going okay, I think she's a little too innocent and I think in a proper sub Dom relationship things need to be explained and spoken about and Sesshomaru as the experienced one should have just sat her down and told her the ins and outs and gotten confirmation that Kagome was interested in perusing this kind of relationship. She said no so many times and still I guess her body reacts where it's a "no can be maybe" kind of situation but still there should have been proper. I know it's just a story but for anyone reading that is interested in bdsm, please talk things out properly before someone gets hurt or traumatized
So wait, why did Sango bring Kagome to a kink party if she knew she wasn't into it?? If my friend was scared of that kind of stuff I wouldn't drag her somewhere AND THEN LEAVE HER THERE and let a complete stranger take her home, other than that, the story is going okay, I think she's a little too innocent and I think in a prober sub Dom relationship things need to be explained and spoken about and Sesshomaru as the experienced one should have just sat her down and told her the ins and outs and gotten confirmation that Kagome was interested in perusing this kind of relationship. She said no so many times and still I guess her body reacts where it's a "no can be maybe" kind of situation but still there should have been proper. I know it's just a story but for anyone reading that is interested in bdsm, please talk things out properly before someone gets hurt or traumatized
Ahh thank you for the updates!! Can't wait to see their journey! Please consider posting in A03, lots more traffic there and more will come across this wonderful story :)
Omg just binged this story and I LOVE IT! I love your writing, please bless us with an update soon!!
Haha! Loved this part:
“You aren’t coming inside!” Determined to shut him out, she used more force. He expected to feel annoyed, but he felt playful.
“You’d love it if I did.” Sesshoumaru grinned, enjoying the image of Kagome’s mortified face.
Oh, a naughty InuYasha is a good InuYasha.. ;p
He caught himself a red-headed Sango and Sesshoumaru is about to catch a blue-eyed Kagome...?
Hm... :-)
Great first chapter.. I love how you write and describe the settings.
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I really like this story. So glad it came back. I don't understand why he felt rejected. She said she didn't JUST like him. It was more. That's a good thing. Then things got sour.
Can't wait to read more
It would be amazing if you could fix the formatting on the chapter ????
Thank you for another incredible update. Always looking forward to it! As usual, love their roles and connection. Opening him up but in character. Can't wait for more! Why do I have a bad bad feeling about Kagura
Thank you thank you for another update! They are so cute! I can't help but grin during their interactions. Can't wait for more. You do so well at making their connection and tension feel so real
Kagome is such a brat I love how it drives Sess crazy. She's completely not what he wants yet she's everything he wants and needs. I love it! Thanks for sharing
I love this story and the fast but slow build up is so nice.
Omg! How exciting! Love the feel and theme of this. It's building up slowly but perfectly for someone who's new to S/D. Can't wait for more. Your attention to detail is impeccable
This was everything and nothing what i thought this story would be. I am enjoying it so much. So ready for her training !!!!
Oooh I can't wait!!!
Holy cow, yess please! I need like.... A LOT .more of this.
So innocent...so sweet... our perfect kagome! She's going to get in trouble just running around places like that! This chapter is so great! I like how feisty she is and that she doesn't and does submit! Great job!
Awwww! I love that Inuyasha called him brother! Looks like they have a close relationship... I really like this that Inuyasha forces friendship and familial relationships upon our poor lonely Ice block. this is such a great start already- can't wait for the next chapter!
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