My goodness!! i am in love with every last word of this story! you're doing great, keep up the wonderful work!!
Ohhh my god. This chapter was especially good. I love how you describe their little group so well, their interactions so believable and in character - where Jaken recalls his favorite foods and the ingredients that make them gag, I can just see that lol - and how you described Kagome's decision to go after the comb. This story can really go different places and I'm so excited as to where you'll be taking them all. Thank you soooo much for gracing us with your awesome writing.
Dude be flirty af. Aaye.
I think this was one of my favorite chapters! So excited about this story.
susie (Chapter 31) - Thu 08 Apr 2021
"Come away from there, you two. You'll freeze to death- and then I'll get blamed for it!"
I love Jaken justifying his concern right there. Looks like Rin isn't the only one emulating her lord XD
Even though I know there is still more heartbreak coming, it makes me happy to see everyone getting closer to kagome. This story tugs at my heart in every way. I absolutely love it more and more with each chapter I read
Misunderstood Maiden (Chapter 30) - Tue 06 Apr 2021
Ugh my heartttttt....the feelzzzzzz!!!
Ovela (Chapter 30) - Tue 06 Apr 2021
Thanks for including this chapter. It needed to be addressed. I like how Sesshomaru not only explained it but didn't dismiss it as a weakess and something to be looked down in a person.
Such a nice give and take. It's getting to be quite the dance between them.
Eryn (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Apr 2021
I really love this side of Sesshoumaru, and Kagome is just the sweetest, and true to character.
That nuzzle tho!
Careful, Sesshomaru. One might suspect you of being interested ????
Misunderstood Maiden (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Apr 2021
Its happening!!!!
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Ovela (Chapter 29) - Mon 05 Apr 2021
Oh! I'm LOVING a teasing Sesshomaru! More of him please <3
Jade (Chapter 28) - Mon 05 Apr 2021
I LIVE for the interactions you write between characters. I love it!
Nice follow up to your last chapter. I think he liked the idea of biting her. LOL
Misunderstood Maiden (Chapter 28) - Sun 04 Apr 2021
Gosh love love it. The growth and subtleties of budding feelings are just everything.
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