Love your style of writing! And this concept! Very unique and well written! Also, your portrayal of Kagome felt nice. You let her be soft and feminine but didn't disrespect her or down play her to a ditz.
This was so beautiful! An awesome AU, definitely stirred up the feels. Did Hajime turn out to be hanyou? Also, Kagome with Sess's markings sounds kinda hot, I'd draw it if I could ;) Thank you so much for sharing!