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SmilingFool (Chapter 18) - Sat 01 May 2021

Okay Kaori knows Inu Yasha screwed with her and that he intended to mate Kagome while have her as a concubine.....  Hope Kagome puts him in his place and finds a way for Sesshomaru to hear her confession the way he was meant to from the beginning.  I want some kick ass time between the hanyo and the miko.....  please.

Young Kagome (Chapter 18) - Sat 01 May 2021

Mmm this whole chapter was a bit confusing to me. I don't even really know what I don't understand. I think I'm confused on what the demon customs and consequences are. So he didn't mate Kaori yet so that means he's not going to, I get that. But I don't understand the why behind it. You had me up until after they explained about why 25 is an important age. I'm going to reread and see if I understand more clearly. I believe more chapters will help me wrap my head around this ;)

SmilingFool (Chapter 17) - Sat 17 Apr 2021

Wow that was an estranged marriage and hopefully Kaori won't be like any of her family or non-familiar members who'd go after Kagome out of spite...  But damn Inu Yasha stringing her along for so many years and still wants Kagome because of a curse on his mate that may or may not take affect once the babe is born....  I hope Kagome kicks Inu Yasha's ass or SITS HIM TO HELL AND BACK..... 

Loved the chapter can't wait to read what happens next.

Inuaddict (Chapter 17) - Fri 16 Apr 2021

Omg are you trini, cus ik that show is playing currently here and that its an older soap. 


Inuaddict (Chapter 17) - Fri 16 Apr 2021

Omg are you trini, cus ik that show is playing currently here and that its an older soap. 


Young Kagome (Chapter 17) - Fri 16 Apr 2021

I forgot to say Happy Birthday!!!! I hope you enjoyed it! :D

Young Kagome (Chapter 17) - Fri 16 Apr 2021

Inuyasha is so despicable in this story!!! How horrible. Poor Kaori all oblivious. I'm so happy she's finally going to know the truth. I'm sad it had to happen that way for her. And I'm glad Kagome has moved on too! Please update soon! 

Nilee1 (Chapter 17) - Fri 16 Apr 2021

Happy Birthday!

elementalkitusneangel (Chapter 17) - Fri 16 Apr 2021

damn inuyasha really just went "yeah i know you were cursed to feel the pain of being cheated on and abandoned...well i'm going to make you the other woman anyway and i'll impregnate you to to make it better." -_-

Michelle (Chapter 17) - Fri 16 Apr 2021

Happy birthday! 

Thank you for this wonderful story. Ou have helped me through some rough times this past year. Thank you for sharing your talent and stories. 

Young Kagome (Chapter 16) - Fri 19 Mar 2021

I don't think it was a mistake! It was just one possible ending. There can be many ways this goes. I'm not a writer so I can't give you any specifics unfortunately or ideas on how to go about the process. But on the bright side now you get to do the fun part and come up with a new direction to the story! Finding a twist we readers didn't or wouldn't think of is a talent I believe all authors have. It'll be difficult but I believe in your story telling capabilities. 

Mecca (Chapter 16) - Fri 19 Mar 2021

I love where you're going with it! No Mistake! I would see it was she realizes that "love takes time" and in her case, it takes time to open her eyes to the truth. She's in love with him but it also can be returned, once she comes to the realization that she's the one he's been pining after. Life gets busy but im so glad you're able to post when you can! Take care!

SmilingFool (Chapter 16) - Fri 19 Mar 2021

No that part is fine, however she should know by whom he is talking about just by the information Sesshomaru has given but then again she is clueless as a new born babe...  LOL  Hopefully someone will tell her who Sesshomaru is in love with so she kick herself in the arse.

Valasaurus (Chapter 16) - Fri 19 Mar 2021

Another wonderful chapter. I don't think you made a mistake in her confession. The real payoff will be once she gets over her brain fog and realizes that he loves her too.

Anj (Chapter 16) - Thu 18 Mar 2021

I like the fact that we know how Kagoma feels. It's like we're in on the secret and can root for them to figure it out. Aso, the nature of their interactions just scream I want to be with you but don't want to mess up what we have so I'll just be glad to have you as is. Anyway love the fic and I hope life chills out for you soon.

Valasaurus (Chapter 15) - Wed 03 Mar 2021

Drat, I was hoping one of them would wisen up and confess! the shyness is killing me!

Young Kagome (Chapter 15) - Mon 01 Mar 2021

Thank you for clearing that up lmao my goofy ass still thought it was someone else. I'm so happy to see you update! 

SmilingFool (Chapter 15) - Mon 01 Mar 2021

That was a great chapter....  Sesshomaru needs to hear Kagome fighting with Inu Yasha to know and understand just how much Kagome loves him that she feels her love is unrequited because he loves someone else.  Right there would be the declaration he needed to hear.  But you're the author so I'll let you write what you need to.  Update soon.

Mecca (Chapter 14) - Mon 15 Feb 2021

Noooo please, I hope Kags figured out how to help Sess before it's too late! >.<

SmilingFool (Chapter 14) - Fri 12 Feb 2021

Ah no, why did he have to flee why didn't he tell Kagome....  Ichika could have held on for a while longer without  Kagome because she needed to get to Sesshomaru.  Now you say angst it makes me sad you want to kill him off damn this is killing me....  I hope Kagome goes and finds him.

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