Lovely story! I have to say I’m hooked. The drabble format actually works really well and flows nicely for this story. It doesn’t feel as if the moments are unfinished/cut short for the sake of keeping the chapters drabble length. You really feel the weight of their exhaustion and sadness in each one and I look forward to seeing how they grow together. Each snippet feels like one more baby step to lead them towards overcoming their hardship and so beautiful to me. The emotions and interactions feel natural and genuine for the two characters. I’m so impressed with this drabble and the story has just started, so I finally just had to leave a review! (I’m usually a looong oneshot or long full chapter SessKag kinda gal) Regardless if you decide to keep your chapters short or full length, great work and I’m excited for more!
Nilee1 (Chapter 12) - Sun 09 Jun 2019
This story is so addictin; I always want more.
silence (Chapter 12) - Sun 09 Jun 2019
I personally like the drabbles and am enjoying it so far. But if you want to turn it into a full chapter story then that is completely your choice and I support your decision.
Orotami (Chapter 12) - Sun 09 Jun 2019
I'd love to see a full blown chapter story. But, I'm also partial to the bliss and passion of the short pieces. It truly depends on how complex and long of a story you wish to create. I just require 4 or 5 uploaded at once if it stays short. Helps keep you in the mood. Plus I normally re read the entire piece just to go back to that place and emotions with the characters... side note: I wonder just how far from the well they are.
Toni (Chapter 12) - Sun 09 Jun 2019
As much as I like this story. I think chapters would be better. keep up the great work
Faith (Chapter 12) - Sun 09 Jun 2019
I like both drabbles and chapter stories. The short portions are so far suiting this story. But that doesn't mean turning it into chapters would be bad either. I know that's not terribly helpful. I just don't want you to get stuck and have the flow you've got going ruined by trying to switch forms. Do what feels right for you and the story. I'm sure we'll enjoy reading either.
Thanks for updating! Can’t wait to read more!!!:)
Orotami (Chapter 11) - Sat 08 Jun 2019
Oh man. Huge confrontation of feelings for both parties. It's ok Kagome. You can cry again and take another hug while your at it!
Orotami (Chapter 9) - Sat 08 Jun 2019
Harsh reality, Kagome. You almost didnt make it with the faster dog around...
Orotami (Chapter 8) - Sat 08 Jun 2019
Simply beautiful. Can't wait for more!
Such a hanger! Love it though.
Toni (Chapter 2) - Thu 06 Jun 2019
Like this story. Looking forward to more chapters. Interested to see how this progresses.
This looks interesting. Looking forward to more!!:)
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