Very interesting so far, I like how you used the hell hounds instead of the Yomotsu-hisame in your mythology tale. Inus are far better than hags in my opinion. It will be interesting to see where you take this. The only mistake I found in the tale was with Amaterasu, which it was just the spelling. When I read it, it gave me a pause as I tried to think what God you where talking about. Lol But other than that everything was great! Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more. :D
Nallely (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Nov 2018
Ok I need more please, very interesting, hope you update very very soon!
What an awesome beginning! Can’t wait to read more!
Keo (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Nov 2018
I'm hooked! Can't wait for the next update!
Love to read the next chapter. Would like to see how Kagome is placed in the story.
Updated soon.
Jamie (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Nov 2018
Very interesting start... I wonder, though- that blue flame... couldn't be related to the fiery spirit of a certain miko, could it? And Sesshomaru... stubborn as ever. I look forward to seeing what draws him out!
Cool story! I liked totasai character in this. The story about the gods was really interesting.
This story sounds interesting, please update the next chapter quickly!
I am very intrigued by this story. I recently read part of the myth in another story I read and found it very interesting.
Your story has me fascinated and would like to read more because I believe I am going to enjoy it very much.
There are a few missing prepositions and repeating words here and there but it was still a nice chapter.
I like your version of Totosai...always knew he wasn't as dense as he pretends to be. lol :)
I wonder how Kagome will figure into the story.
Looking forward to future updates. I hope you update soon and if you can...a little longer chapters...hehehe ;)
Just asking. :)
| | | | | | | | |