Are you going to finish? its really good.

Oh now this is a REALLY neat story. Such a unique storyline - I simply cannot wait to read the upcoming chapters!

Great job!!

This is an interesting and intriguing start to this story.

It seems a bit disjointed or confusing.  I imagine it will all gel out eventually...just have to wait and see.  :)

Hoping to read further updates.

Cheers!!!

I am intrigued with this story. Please update.