Great story! I love how you made Inuyasha such a jerk. He acts just like a real prince of Egypt probably would have. Anyway, please update soon I cannot wait to read the rest of this story!
Oh my gosh! So much better than what I had down originally! I'm so sad that I didn't see you updated sooner!
Ah, poor Kagome. Poor Rin, too, while i'm pitying people. What I really can't wait for is for a glimpse at the pharaoh - maybe he'll remind InuYasha of his manners XD
Can't wait for more, as always! Bye~
| I love Egypt and its great how you placed the story here instead of Japan. Continue. Its amazing
| Egyptian history and mythology is my crack. I CAN'T WAIT to read more of this! Your writing is crisp and exciting with just enough description. You have a great turn of phrase, and your visuals make it effortless to imagine IY has always been in Egypt.
| I'm intrigued and interested. The begining bodes well for this story, I look forward to the next chapter XD
hasu86 (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Oct 2008
| You've got me hooked. Quite the setting you've got here and so much to work with. Your writing is on par and descriptions of the characters and environment very well done. Excellent so far. I can't wait to see where you take this!
Lady Scheherazadea (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Oct 2008
| You got me so worried about what's going to happen next. I have a bad feeling. I can't wait to see what happens next. So please update soon!
Mikaela (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Oct 2008
| *fangirl squeal*
Amazing :D I can't bring up the words to tell you how amazing this story is ;) And, I say again, you are much more talented than I! I can't wait to read more!
*drools at the thought of Sesshomaru you put in my mind*
| The second chapter is very good! It really is interesting the way you use imagery to set Sesshomaru and InuYasha apart. Keep up the good work!
Mikaela (Chapter 1) - Sun 19 Oct 2008
| OMG! Amazing~! So much better than my original start! And such a mean point of drop off, dear! I want to see more, even though I already have a pretty damn good idea about what is going to happen. You're amazing. Absolutely amazing. And, now, I shall advertise you in the chatroom :D Can't wait for more!!!
| Wow! This is really amazing! Can't wait for you to update. I have always loved Egyptian mythology, and you incorporate it very well into the story.
Lady Scheherazadea (Chapter 1) - Sun 19 Oct 2008
| This is amazing!! I can't wait to see more!!
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