Read this ages ago and just re-read...jaysus...you certainly know how to write! In between all of the wonderful smut you have a lovely, juicy plotline. I really hope you find some inspiration to return to this piece. You’re an amazing writer ~ 

Thank you for this fantastic work. Looking forward to what’s next! Thank you

Very hot and sexy chapter. Nicely written also.

It sounds like Sesshomaru's beast is trying to impregnant Kagome on purpose.

If so, I wonder why. I'm wondering if he is trying to insure that his rational side would have to do the honorable thing and mate or marry her.  

Oh well, we will have to wait and see...looking forward to the next chapter.

Execellent writing!!!

good intense chapter. I am eager for more.

p.s. the chapter is double posted. though I'd let you know.

thx for updating!

This was awesome, although I’m feeling a bit sad for Kagome. But at the same time, she should know what she’s doing. So oh well lol. i Can’t wait for the next update, this is so well written.

An awesome start...very smexy and wonderfully written.

This looks intriguing and I think that I may like it.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Excellent job!!!

This is so amazing! I love the viewfinder series, Fei Long hot lol. I can’t wait for your next chapter. Update soon please.