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Sarah (Chapter 14) - Fri 12 May 2017

8.....OoO


KShadeslady (Chapter 13) - Sat 06 May 2017

Maybe she has been waiting a long time too. Very nice. Thanks for updating. 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 13) - Fri 05 May 2017

Hmmm interesting!


Sarah (Chapter 13) - Thu 04 May 2017

Well he started to get a read for what is going on it seems.


Sarah (Chapter 12) - Fri 28 Apr 2017

Nice chapter


MythMagykFae (Chapter 12) - Thu 27 Apr 2017

Hmm, more and more interesting!


KShadeslady (Chapter 12) - Thu 27 Apr 2017

Ah lovely...she is making him nuts. I love it. Delightful story, Thanks so much for updating. 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 11) - Thu 20 Apr 2017

Hmmm, I wonder what she wants...


Sarah (Chapter 11) - Thu 20 Apr 2017

I wonder what she will ask for.


Angela (Chapter 10) - Fri 14 Apr 2017

Omg this just hit me hahaha this is me just thinking far ahead into the story but this is what i thought: the last sentence kagome said made me think that what if sesshoumaru's wish is to find someone to love and if he finds that in kagome then his wish has basically been granted but then once his wish has been granted he wouldn't need the shop anymore so he wouldn't be able to see her anymore ;_; NOOOOOO!! Haha but these are just my thoughts sooo yeah haha 


MythMagykFae (Chapter 10) - Thu 13 Apr 2017

LOL that conversatoin though...

Nice chapter!


Sarah (Chapter 10) - Thu 13 Apr 2017

Oh well we're finally getting somewhere he's actually asking what I think are the right questions we're looking for the right answers one of the other charges hell with this great chapter can't wait till the next one


MythMagykFae (Chapter 9) - Fri 07 Apr 2017

*wink not wonk lol


MythMagykFae (Chapter 9) - Fri 07 Apr 2017

Hint hint, why not add a wonk Kagome lol

Nice chapter!


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Fri 07 Apr 2017

He's going to scoff at that! Lovely update. I love Drabbles but oh...I just want more! Thanks for updating. 


Sarah (Chapter 9) - Thu 06 Apr 2017

(0.0) Nailed it on head with this chapter.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 8) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

More and more intruiging...


Aviel (Chapter 8) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

This is quite a delightful story so far! Although I'm not familiar with Pet Shop of Horrors and xxxHolic, the names of both titles and their characters do ring a bell. I am enjoying the pacing in each drabble, and I appreciate how you manage to provide enough information in your descriptions without being too wordy. There's also a great balance of imagery and dialogue without one overtaking the other, which can sometimes end up being more tedious than helpful or even useful. I absolutely adore Kagome's formal introduction and Sesshoumaru's observation of "her bright blue eyes sparkling like sunlight on seawater." Just a beautiful use of words. I don't think my attention has been caught by prose like that in a very long time. Having said that, I'm a huge fan of your writing style! :)

In regards to the plot, I find myself just as intrigued as Sesshoumaru about the mysterious shop and its tenants. The shop's location reminds me a bit of 12 Grimmauld Place, and its function seems like the Room of Requirement from Harry Potter, except that our dear Lord of the West apparently has no idea what he wants yet. I love the push and pull of having some of his questions answered with such obscurity that it's borderline frustrating (for Sesshoumaru's sake) but also exciting at the same time. It's interesting how Kagome and adult!Shippou have pointed out his budding intrigue, but I get the impression that they're just as curious about his presence, given his prestigious title. It's a wonderful dynamic.

I look forward to your future updates!


Sarah (Chapter 8) - Thu 30 Mar 2017

Nice little cheaper


Sarah (Chapter 7) - Thu 23 Mar 2017

Nice chapter can't wait for the next update


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