Another version of mermaid tale. . Please keep it coming!!! :(
Aaaah! So many questions. O.k. my main ones are what did Kagome do ( or at least she thinks she did) that resulted in the disapperance of the Merling? Why does the "Voice" want to exterminate all the Merling? How did he get rid of the others? Can't wait to get answers as you develop this story.
In regards to Kanna, I like her cleverness. At first I thought she was going to be completely uncaring but you showed her good side. To the best of her capabilities she tried helping Kagome while following orders. Hopefully it will be a nasty surprise for the "Voice" when he finds out Kagome is still alive. Also, I think Kagome's now hidden mark will be a great surprise for Sesshomaru.
Thanks for an awesome update.
I'm kinda sad you changed the eye color from blue to brown, but good chapter. I look forward to the next.
I cant wait for sesshy to be reintroduced!!! Time for reunion!!
Oh my gosh kanna is naraku's underling maybe. . :O please keep her safe. . And want them to meet as soon as possible :)
Oh man! Damn naraku has to mess with everything! Hopefully Kanna can get Kagome to go to the festival.
Just finished reading the latest two chapters and you answered my questions, thank you. ^_^
I feel bad for Kagome, she gave Kanna her most precious treasures and Kanna is going to betray her to that voice (is it Naraku?). >_< How could you Kanna? (Although I have a feeling this will probably result in Kagome meeting Sesshomaru again). Also was Kagura tricked out of her heart too? Is Kagura the sister Kanna mentioned in her story?
^_^ I was grinning when I read that Sesshomaru still remembers Kagome. Can't wait till they finally meet.
I am really enjoying this story so far, thank you for the updates and I hope you update whenever you can.
Saiya (Chapter 4) - Fri 25 Mar 2016
That Evil heart stealin Jerk
Mona (Chapter 4) - Thu 24 Mar 2016
I knew Kanna was going to be traitorous. I hope whatever befalls Kagome is not that horendous.
I am looking forward to the next chapter. Really interesting so far.
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