I made an account just so I could follow this story easier and to leave a comment I'm really intrigued by this plot line however I have a couple of questions for you.
okay so first of all, I believe it was chapter 10 there were some discrepancies between what kagome felt/ did and what kouga saw down at the beach, I was just wondering if I kept on reading that wrong? I also have the question I think everyone else has, in the beginning you said that her bite mark was slow to heal and eventually scarred. Why is it that sesshoumaru has never noticed her scar? I get there are multiple possibilities I.e her hair is always worn down, but then whenever he smells her neck or the intimate scene of Ch.11 would disprove that one, there's also the possibility that when she was made human by kanna, kanna removed the scar by magic to make kagome more attractive to the human race? I'm really looking forward to your update!!
this story is by far favourite story I'm reading right now. I can't wait to find out how naraku is using kanna and kagura and what happened to all the mermaids
please update soon!!
Shanoko (Chapter 11) - Thu 14 Apr 2016
Yay! Another chapter! I'm anxious to see what happens next. A part of me wants Kagome to go back to the ocean. It's sad that she is the last of her kind. But of course I want to see her and Sesshomaru together. Can't wait to read more. Thank you!
Blommie8 (Chapter 11) - Thu 14 Apr 2016
Gyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~ (not much of a review)
Poor sea :(
Leaora (Chapter 11) - Wed 13 Apr 2016
Soooooo close!!!! The ocean is pissed!
Saiya (Chapter 11) - Wed 13 Apr 2016
Dun dun dunnnnn
Hi! Sorry for the late review.
Wow. These last few chapters have been overwhelming. I'm not sure what to think. Will Kagome really return to the sea? or will she just have enought contact with the sea that it will help her solve the mystery of what really happened to her people and also have a HEA with Sesshomaru?
I was going, "Come on Sesshomaru let her have contact with some sea water." and "Why can't Sesshomaru see the mark he left on her neck?" I hope Sesshomaru isn't stupid enough to have her engaged to someone else or him going off to marry someone else. :( My gosh that would be terrible. O.K. I'm just speculating at the moment. Whatever you write though, is greatly appreaciated. Thank you for the update.
P.S. If, big IF, but IF Kagome's heritage were revealed, would it make a difference to the youkai court? Would they accept the mating?
Awesome chapter. I can't wait for the the next chapter!
Anonymous (Chapter 11) - Wed 13 Apr 2016
Please update again soon, this is a great fanfic. I am wondering if Kagome will be returned to the sea or regain her memories.
Saiya (Chapter 10) - Thu 07 Apr 2016
wow
Yes, yes you have! So its finally time for them to get it on!!
Mona (Chapter 10) - Thu 07 Apr 2016
If your reason for Sesshoumaru not wanting Kagome is because she is human and not a taiyoukai or daiyoukai, then yes you clarified his reasonings. He doesn't want 'weakness' or to be his father and face the backlash or tarnish of mating a human.
Murasaki (Chapter 10) - Thu 07 Apr 2016
I just LOVE your story. It's absolutely unique and the characters are just on point!!!! I cant wait to read more!!! LOVE IT!!!
Lemon please O.o
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