Freya Ishtar
 |
Created On: 07/08/2011 19:18:39
 Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review Once Upon a Time in Khem. I don't know that I started out thinking political thriller/political intrigue with this story, but once I knew it was going to be in a ruling class social setting, I guess political schemes and turmoil become part of the setting, too.
I'm just hoping I can pull it off  Feedback from GoddessDinaizu: LOL great ideas start small and grow into large things. Politics are sort of the natural fight with the class social setting (which I totally disassociated until you made mention). Being that Kagome is supposed to be the last one I think puts her in her own class of her own like a unique bird (which may have her treated like a freak show too) but she's contesting with the harem girls, Sess's affection/attention, Kouga's will (maybe lol you never said), and I'm sure if she's strong willed she's got her own goals.
I'm not sure what to do lol. Now I keep thinking about the crazy mess they can get into...everything sounds so scrumptious. If you ever need someone to play devil's advocate or anything I'd be happy to help other wise I'll be impatiently awaiting chapters in the wings back here.
You've inspired me to write what has been rolling through my brain (serious procrastination). You write well and thread your ideas wonderfully I'm sure you can pull anything off. So lol no pressure but I'm taking notes
|
